good and cute story :-)

Yup, adorable... Absolutely adorable.

GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY SO GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
WAT THE FLIP GAY! GAY! SO AMAZINGLY GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GAYYYYYYY SEAL IN THE HOUSE GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

love it! Good job!

Awesome! I loved it :)

This was so sweet and well written! I loved it!

This piece is quite entertaining, though I would suggest watching your vocabulary and syntax. Some of your "big" words don't quite fit into the phrasing making readers go back and reread sentences. Don't be afraid of "small" words; they help with overall clarity. "Big" words are good for mixing things up so readers don't get annoyed with too much repetition. I suspect you use a thesaurus, though I may be wrong. It seems as though you found synonyms, but didn't go back and check to make sure your sentences still made sense. It's an easy hole to fall into, and is easily avoided with proof-reading. I suggest you find a nice English major, they tend to be good at editing.

M... fluff :D How I cuddle thee.

I really enjoyed reading this. You have a certain mastery with words that really allows a reader to place themselves in the character's shoes.

IE: I practically felt like I was drowning in a flooding forest.

But isn't that just like Sonic to run off and try to take down Eggman all by himself? Silly Hedgehog, suicidal missions are for -two- people!

Aww, cute! I have to admit, I like the title - When I read 'fill the gap' I thought it would come to mean how Sonic 'fills the gap' Maria left in Shadow's heart, but I do like the more physical twist you gave it. XD Plus, the image of a rain-drenched forest at midnight is just utterly romantic for a japanophile like me, even though i'd probably tell you something different if *I* was stuck in one...;)

All in all, lovely fic. If you write it with snow instead of rain, it qualifies for Christmas. Now I just wish we had a sonadow christmas challenge again...:D

Happy Holidays!

Wow. This is really, really good. You've woven in a nice idea with complex language and a great sense of structure. I will definitely be looking out for more work by you in the future.