Again I like the plot, your grammar is good and You didn't make Naruto a dipshit. Good job with the Story.

Ah it's nice to hear from you again, as always you outdone yourself especially in this chapter. The demonstration of techniques were a little odd, but they sure impressed me.

Now for the dear thing I got two guesses, it's either from Drawn Together, or just Bambi.

Bambi.

Cookie, please.

And I look forward to seeing what you believe to be the better plot.

I liked your story because it wasn't stupid and was well writtem and had a good plot. Can't wait to read more.

Wow. Poor naruto. Having to fight taht guy, who he trained with. Course that guy was a bit of an arrogant jerk, though it's understandable considering the disappointment he went through.

Overall, very excellent chapter. very nice. I liked it.

No real criticism's from me.

For the cookie, that was a reference to the original Disney motion picture Bambi.

Nice! Naruto was training and fighting his guts out. Awesome!

I read the previous version and this one and I have to say, you are one hell of a writer. Can't wait till the next chapter

The story was good it kinda had me going that Naruto was going after the war angel. But I also want to know when you are going to post The Ultimate Enemy, Legend of the Dragon Rated M, The Honor of a Fox, InCREDIBLE can you email me when you are posting them or putting them on fanfiction the summaries sound good...!

I HAVE TO SAY THIS IS A GREAT STORYLINE Reign AG. KEEP IT UP IT HAS A GREAT PLOT AND IT FLOWS ALL TOGETHER NICELY. THE BROOD WARRIOR IS WAITING FOR MORE!

I think this is a good story so far and have already added it to my favorite stories.

Very interesting and who know the other princesses are?

Just don't ever add Sakura in the Harem,they're not match at all.

Good! Update soon...

Love the training chapters and the progress made both physically but more importantly mentally! They have all grown well beyond their individual training as shinobi.

Great story! I'm only upset that I only have one more chapter to read before I'm stuck waiting for new updates. Oh well it had to happen.

Thanks

DB

That was an excellent chapter! Naruto continues to positively influence those who he can sense will improve and even got Sakura to change her view, maybe. I'll wait to see how that goes. Kurenai's coming out party was done very well. It makes so much sense to augment her illusions with cold steel. Her enemies won't know how much trouble they are in until it's too late, great combination of skills.

Good story!

Thanks

DB

Cool, can't wait to see what you have planned for the battle! W