You're right about Harry, at least in my opinion. And aww, just aww.

Very bad. Booooooooo!

Harry wouldn't be so keen on seeing Dudley again not after the way he was treated as a child.

Awww...this is sweet! I agree, family means too much to Harry for him to forget Dudley. Thanks for the great story. Very affectionate! :)

OOH! Dudley marrying a witch! That is just BRILLIANT! (You really should make the story of Mr and Mrs Dursley finding out though!)

But... Mr Weasley is called Arthur, not Author... that's job...

This is a sweet fiction here. I noticed a few errors but they are simple fix ones, no big deal at all. _ This is really sweet. I always love these fics where Dudley and Harry make up and act family-like. Good work. :D

cute

Hmm, realistic interpretation.

Very random :S

Very nice and plausible, but i really thing the beginning would be more awkward, especially for Dudley; especially after Alica explanations.

Ciao!