Reviews for Holly, Phoenix, Diamond, and Elm
ProfessorPedant chapter 6 . 6/22
An enjoyable story. I found I did not mind the gender swap. I enjoyed the OCs. And interactions with Snape was particularly fun I would enjoy continuing reading if you ever wrote more on this.
NazgulBelserion chapter 1 . 5/28
Ahhh man you had to ruin it with gender change lameeeee I wanted a son for Emma a male version of her well i lost all interest now since it's your typical fem Harry stuff
Lordlexx chapter 1 . 3/23
You should put up a tag for FemHarry... While I will never say anything against what an author wants to write, us readers don't particularity want to waste our time just to find out we aren't going to have an interest in a story because you left out a plot detail that is often a major deciding factor for a lot of readers.

And the magic is in the blood. If there was no blood from James Potter then there would be no inheritance from the Potter family. The wills would have been made out to have a Harry James Potter inherent, not a Hazel Zoe Frost that has no relation to the Potters in her blood. You can't forge magic.
DalkonCledwin chapter 5 . 8/15/2019
MI5.625?
DalkonCledwin chapter 4 . 8/15/2019
So much for not telling Dumbledore where Savage Land is located.
DalkonCledwin chapter 3 . 8/15/2019
What I want to know: is how do they even KNOW about the scar’s existence? I mean you had Emma taking ‘Harry’ from Godric’s Hollow before anyone could possibly have found out that the scar even existed. It’s not likely that Sirius would have noticed it in the amount of time he had available to him to notice it, so where does their knowledge of it come from exactly?
DalkonCledwin chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
So this fic… it is an Earth-1610 setting? As in the setting that the movies are largely based on?

And how did she manage to ‘eavesdrop’ on people and not succeed in deducing that the sorting is carried out by a Hat? Not everyone of those adults is going to have Occlumency barriers you know. That skill is ABSURDLY rare.

Huh... that is an actually valid counter to the 'has a Servant' retort, at least with regards to Dumbledore and Minerva. Won't do much, if anything, to stop the other students or Snape, I'm afraid.
VizeerLord chapter 6 . 5/22/2019
Not the best, but good enough.
Kuma chapter 6 . 3/8/2019
Great story, loved the plot it truly is unique which I found refreshing to read.
adamskelton1993 chapter 6 . 11/22/2018
this is a very interesting and great story i hope you continue it someday.
ClaireR89 chapter 6 . 9/21/2018
Ya gonna update this anytime?
OmegaUltima chapter 6 . 9/15/2018
Argh, 8-year old cliffhangers, my one weakness

Other than grievous bodily harm, etc

Well, maybe you'll come back eventually, hopefully
Hikari Nova chapter 6 . 5/14/2018
revive and update this please it's really interesting and enjoyable
Time Emperor chapter 6 . 3/3/2018
So fucking boring. That was one of the least enjoyable stories I have ever read.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/14/2018
Well, that was enjoyable while it lasted
151 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »