Dash it! I didn't notice that this story is unfinished. It's beautiful. Refreshingly different to have Spock revealed, via Uhura, as young and unsure. I suspect it would have taken another 36 chapters for them to reach an accord. Sigh...

Damn you man. Damn youuuuuuu. I feel greatly for the fans who've been waiting for 6 years, but they probably had the privilege of languishing on your life journal, which is no more *anguished, unushed tears* This has been a most pleasant dream, ending to soon. And your penname is SO hardcore.

Have you been told lately how Brilliant you are? I do believe the more genial ratings are the best way to showcase one's talent. Not that you don't absolutely Burn them all. This has got to be of my most favourite.

In a way, I'm glad that the schoolgirl universe is different. It cuts me badly that she has no name, as yet. Back to my Uhura love. (Totally addicted to your writing that description of coffee...I hope you write more food!)

This was amazing. Brilliant. Very strong but yet so soft and tender. Congrats and thank you.

How in the world had i missed your stories? 3

A simply powerful piece of writing - intricate yet purposeful, aware yet blurred. If RL allows, I hope you eventually return to it, as it's far too good to abandon.

I LOVE this story so much, keep coming back to it and re-reading. I really there's more coming!

Beautiful words evoking beautiful feelings. Thank you!

Oh, this fic is so good. I love the concept, and your writing is just beautiful. Great work!

Hey, you don't seem to be updating this anymore (although I'd be overjoyed if you did), but I'd just like to say that I love this story and enjoy revisiting it a lot, even though it's incomplete. It's my favorite representation of their relationship. There's this lightly jazzy, dreamlike quality to the whole piece, and it's so wonderfully sensual in all its meanings. The visuals, the sounds, and just the beautiful tension between the two. It's a lovely, lovely slow burn. I hope you're still writing!

I've been reading this story since it was first published, and I still come back to it sporadically! After seeing Into Darkness, I could not resist re-reading - it's just as well written and beautiful as I remember it being. Thank you for a lovely piece of literature.
Aelyna.

I read this story last night. It is wonderfully written! I love being inside their heads like that! Please tell me there is more! I am new to this site, and fanfic in general, so let me know if there's more to this story I just haven't found yet!

Another of your gems that I found recently. I am in love with this story, it is nearly poetic. :) I can't wait to see how their relationship blossoms.

I reached the end of this chapter, realized there was no next one, and literally juddered to a halt. It felt like my brain had stopped for a moment. I love the flow of this series of captured moments; please, write more! They're beautiful. Truly beautiful.