I enjoyed this story so far, but what happened to Hinata was way too harsh. How would you feel if you had loved someone your whole life only to have them laugh at you after having your tendon’s cut. That scene made Naruto, Hinata, and Sakura look horrible, and honestly just made me feel crapy. I literally have to pretend that that scene didn’t happen in order to continue reading. You may consider writing this scene with a bit more compassion, as I think it cost you a lot of readers, who don’t so easily compartmentalize. I do enjoy your writing so believe you can do better.

I like this.

please update

I love This

Love this story. Fantastic fun. Really looking forward to more!

I have always read your story and I finally gotten to this point. I always lost interest when Sakura gets back before Naruto but I finally pushed through it and this is truly a great story. I hope one day you'll come back to it.

Damn! Naruto is smart as heck! I can’t believe he followed the sound nin and found orochimaru’s base!

Danzo's still out there unaccounted for isn't he?

"Never, even in her wildest dreams, had she thought Sasuke would think of Hinata like that."

Like what? As stuttering? Hinata does stutter. I get you want to make Sasuke incompatible with his team but there are better ways to go about it, or at least ways that make sense. His fanon personality is a bit much, so I hope he's gone soon so I can get a feel for this mostly unbothered. There are a few things that are off, namely grammar, characterization. But the part with her mom nudging Sakura along and her completely missing the point is what made me want to keep reading. It was a nice scene. This chapter's a bit...heavyhanded, to say the least, and the Japanese might eventually get to me, but I like it, for the most part.

please update

I half expect Ino to come out and just immediate give up before running up to Naruto and giving him a hug

really sasuke you know so little about your teammates you didn't know heni was a weapons users?

so Sasuke didn't help his team at all with the exam objective?

determined little Hinata.

I love how they're just like well there goes that part of the exam when Sasuke walks in.

Sakura didn't get to ask questions? Or was her prize the offer of training?