Its incredibly difficult to find stories, esp yaoi that actually include Tarble! This was cute , and it was even mpreg !

weird pairing but still lovely story:

This is adorable! I adore Yamcha and Tarble is too cute for words. There needs to be way more stories of these two !

The story is well written, your grammar is very good. That said, if you're a normal hetero male, the pairing will make you sick.

aw, i loved it! Wonderful work!

That was really good! You did an excellent job playing with first person! *hug* It was a really lovely fic. I really enjoyed it :)

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One of your best, hun. I really like it. And you know how I feel about Bulma xD But really, you should be very proud of this _ It's your writing at its best. You're getting better and better. Keep it up! (Or I'll send my hoard of small hairless male concubines after you :P)

ah that is sweet and yes poor yamcha is forgotten about