Reviews for The Legend of Zelda: Sorrow of Silidan
TheSeacat chapter 60 . 5/25/2017
A'ight, that was a good end to a story I never thought I'd see the end of. The shipper in me is disappointed, but you made a very good case there that I honestly can't argue with. Your 7-year dedication is duly noted, thank you.
TooLazytoLogin chapter 46 . 5/22/2017
I've come back after a long time to finish this fic out. I good-naturedly hope you don't fuck Link over at the end.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
Great story, I'm happy its finally finished. I've been following since the first few chapters were posted and I've been keeping an eye on it. Really loved the plot twists as well, and the ending! I hope you writiena sequel too
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 60 . 12/27/2016
Really good ending. This story's been a hell of a ride, KoBM. I plan on re-reading the whole thing once some of those updates you've mentioned are out. Like I've said, in terms of story progression, the only thing that I wasn't thrilled by was the almost nonchalant nature of Soarinox's rise and his march to Hyrule. Sprinkle some more detail on that, fix some grammar here and there, and I think Sorrow of Silidan will be more or less perfect.

Definitely hyped for the sequel. Keep up the great work, man!
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 59 . 12/24/2016
This was an excellent final (presumably) fight scene, and I absolutely love that it ends with the Mortal Draw technique from TP.
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 56 . 12/18/2016
How do I say this...

I started noticing in the past few chapters that the iffy grammar and pacing were detracting from the story. I'm honestly not sure if this is a recent problem or if I'm just noticing now. Some examples in this chapter are Link ripping the legs off the boss, Soarinox actually appearing, and *especially* Harmless jumping into the Four Sword. Slowing the pace down a bit and describing the reactions of individual characters and creatures is welcome at times like these, instead of "Link started ripping off the beetle's legs (are they hard to tear off? does it scream or thrash?). Then he finished tearing three off."

And I don't want to be overbearing, but here's a suggestion. When I write, I like to wait a day after I finish, then read it aloud to myself. That way, I pick up on a lot of my grammatical mistakes or places where I should add or change a detail.

All that said, I still love this story, and I'm still hyped for the ending.
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 53 . 10/31/2016
Every time I see the "new chapter" notification for this in my inbox, I happily freak out a little bit. I have to admit, this chapter felt a little more bland than usual and ended a little earlier than I would've guessed, but that's in comparison to a myriad of masterpieces, so it's still really good. Another small criticism I have is that when Link is playing mills, the word "as" is used a bit too much. If you read it out loud you'll definitely see what I mean. Otherwise, keep up the great work, KOBD!
KDRDEADMAN chapter 53 . 10/29/2016
Please get another chapter out as fast as you can. I love this story so much and I can't wait to see what you make of it.
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 52 . 8/13/2016
Awesome chapter. I'm so hyped for the finale, not to mention the sequel!
middleagemanager chapter 52 . 8/8/2016
I have been following and enjoying this story for quite some time now and just wanted to drop a review to let you know of it. Keep up the good work!
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 51 . 8/1/2016
Always so glad to see an upload from you, KoBM! Great stuff as always, and I'm really excited for this new dungeon!
TriforceWisdom64 chapter 50 . 4/25/2016
Still stoked to see this through to the end! Keep up the great work!
tetraforce theory chapter 49 . 10/17/2015
Glad to see another chapter up and posted, hopefully 50 will start the invasion.
tetraforce theory chapter 48 . 8/30/2015
Interesting developments. I look forward to the next chapter.
tetraforce theory chapter 47 . 7/10/2015
I have this feeling that the final Spirit of links shadow will take Ilia's form of something.
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