Ridiculously cute! Loved Edward confessin' to Bella before anyone else and then finally confrontin' Jasper...with a sweet sweet kiss as a reward for bein' so brave *squeee!*

awww cute :)

I thought it was cute. I hope to maybe see mroe of these two, yeah?

Me like :)

It's really cute

I just wanted to say that I think your an amazing writer. First off, you understand what capitalization and puncuation is, and you don't abbreviate things like you're texting. Also, your style is just awesome. You have some really funny and witty lines in your stories (like in The Mess You Could Sell). Your characters are also consistent, which is really refreshing. So, thank you for being cool enough to publish your awesomeness on this website so that folks like me can be able to enjoy it.

OKAY I LOVED THIS! IT WAS SOOOOO GOOD

great story will there be more chapters?

i liked this story, very creative

I liked this.

a loved it dont stop righting!loved it !

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yay;)3 yum yum, sweet jasperxedward3

I think your story was good. I enjoyed the football talk back and forth. I do wish you had carried the story more out at the end. Just a kiss? Ah, we needed a kiss that keeps up panting-hehehe. ;)

Hey, you got two hot boys lovin each other... that's slash, baby! :D Nice job!