.. This was Beautifully Written and well planned and I Loved Every Second of it! I hope u continue to write, u are amazing writer!

I found this chapter authentic, well done.

I really appreciate that you wrote Ginny kindly. She is one of my favorite characters and I hate to see her bashed. This was a beautiful way to move your story forward. Now Harry has hermione, Ginny and Daphne on his side, and that's a powerful combination. Thank you.

I read all of this in like two days, it is SO SO SO good. Thank you!

I hope there's a special place in Hell for Dumbles. Loved this story.

I have read several of your stories so far - this, the Lion trilogy, and the Forgotten Contract. They are fascinating rewrites to the scenarios detailed in the books. I wanted to take a moment to thank you for your talent in developing characters that only existed in the background in canon into compelling lead characters and romantic interests. You have done much to give me a new layer of appreciation for Rowling's world. I appreciate all the hard work you put into these awesome rewrites, and look forward to reading more of your stories in the coming days.

No encuentro realista que sea Ron quien se enoje con Harry por hablar de más, en el Canon, es justamente Ron quien siempre habla de más y mete en problemas a Harry, creo que hasta aquí llegue con la historia de una Hermione entrometida y manipuladora y un Ron que se comporta noble. todos haciendo que Harry se sienta más mal por algo que no controla y fuera de sus personajes habituales

Loved this.

I can't help it, seems every year or so I go on a fanfiction binge and I always re read this fic.

As usual, Mrs Weasley is a Stupid Fat Uglyword edited*). Always hated that B.

you interchanged gin and daph eyes colours

You fucking Sod. Fuck you. I am not fucking reading your book any longer. Its fucking awful and Proklinjem te da nikad ne pišeš.

You are making Harry dumb. Really? This is the whole point in Fanfiction is to not make him dumb. Like really? Screw off

i actually don't like this. This book is kinda pissing me off. I hate when people go with the cliche and are like oh the Brooding main character. עס איז אַזוי שלעכט, איין געשריבן און זאָל ניט זיין ערלויבט צו שרייַבן ווידער

Rufus damnant vos ad profunda Terrae core.