TT You made me cry, but I was smiling too... Such a woderful job. Very few stories (they can be counted on one hand) can make me cry or feel any extreme emotion like that. So well done. - And such a fascinating idea. You did such an amazing story. - I would have never thought of something like this in a million years. - Well done. I look forward to more from you. -

I honestly don't know what to say about this. There are so many ways the reader can interpret the ending. There's so much that's left unfinished. at the same time, it's those loose ends that really gives the story that slightly haunting feeling as you're reading.

I think the idea is pretty solid, but the work has an awkward length. Too long to be one-shot, not quite long enough to be a novella.

In my personal opinion, its probably better to extend it a bit. It has such a nice frame, the picture would make more impact with more details.

-a warm smile slowly forms, eyes soften with a understanding nod- Brilliant...just, brilliant.

absolutely marvelous. This is my new favouritest christmas story ever. I LOVED IT.

I was HOOKED the whole way through! The plot was very engaging, and the end was twistedly-creepy!

A friend recommended this fic to me, and I'm so glad that I read it! I'd also love to read the beta'd version, but I like how you decided to post it with the days it was occurring on! Creepy!

What an excellently done story! I like how you gave out info just a little here and there in order to keep the plot moving, and you kept everyone in character very well. I did wonder how it was that there were no records kept on the Gundam Pilots of 1916 (you know, like a dossier or something) but it is entirely possible that 1. they didn't think they needed that information since it was Quatre's murder/disappearance Trowa was investigating and 2. they didn't realize the motives that led up to the disappearance involved the entire team.

This was well done, with a nice creep factor built in. Great job!

aw...i wish there were more! plz make a sequel! i love how u juxtapose the events!

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Okay. I'm lost. I really like the story, and the tone you set... but I think I've missed something crucial to the plot.

HOW THE HELL DID THE PILOTS GET IN THE PAINTING?

I'm not usually into suspense or mystery stories... for some reason most of it just goes right over my head. Call me a blond, but well... I am.

Sorry, don't mean to scream. But... I'm confused. *pouts* I wanna know what happened. *tears up and starts crying*

Like I said... what I did understand I liked. And I love the tone and everything, but well... darn. I guess mystery/suspense just isn't my genre.

DJ

O plot thickens indeed, is trowa trapped or mearly represented as once more in the picture of what happened in the past...time will tell. very brief glimpse to inspire a hoast of questions...me thinks all is not as it seems...

ek. THis is all making so much more sense now, and I really, really love it. The mystery is unraveling and we're getting so much closer. I wanna Quatre ghost in my house *pouts*. Great story. Can't wait for more.

DJ

since you are posting theese once a day and they happen to correlate to the actual date i'm homing the guys arrive in time for christman as we get another chapter later today that is fair right...seriously though i am enjoying this and hope it progresses past the actual mystery solving of quatres disapearance is Q still a ghost even though he can become solid? or does he loose his ghostly abilities? do the other pilots get memories of their past lived? how about zechs it would be fun to get him into the mix...maybe with a certain red-headed fork-browed ghost of his own...hm

interesting. Really great AU. Look forward to the rest of your chapters!

Wow. Thats a twist with the body. Keep up the good work.

This is getting pretty good so far.