I like how you say it wasnt twincest, because as I read it, I didnt think it was twincest, but by the end, i was like, damn this girl is in love with her brother! Good story, I always feel bad for Fifi... plus I hate Holly J with a burning passion.

Ur story was sweet!

I have a crush on my twin brother, Deven. We have actually kisses once.

i liked it, just no incest[

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Amazing! You r an Amazing writer and your story shows it. (: Keep going, girl!

This is definitly the best writing ive seen all day. no joke.

-Leah

Aww omg that was great! I wish you'd cntinue though just because I love the stories that could go both ways on incest or just sibling. This was so well written! I love Declan and Fiona

Its actually funny because this was one of the stories that inspired me to write my Fiona/Declan fanfic.

I really appreciated the writing, and being able to feel Fiona's grief,happiness, and confusion. Continue on ,i'm waiting. :D

pleaseee continue this story i love declan and fiona together... not really insest but just make them over the board cute lol

Loves it

Whoa their almost liked a married couple in highschool and with many benifits... I'm surprised they haven't DONE it

This was the sweetest story. I love Declan and Fiona's brother/sister relationship, and I loved how you showed their closeness without making it about twincest.

This story was very good and wonderfully well-written. I like that you left it open to interpretation as to whether Fiona might have some repressed romantic feelings for her brother (and vice versa). It was veey sweet and I definitely think D/F are closer than is normal for a bro/sis, though not neccessarily in an incestuous way. I don't think you have to see it as Fiona wanting to take Holly J's place in Declan's life; I think she just wants to be the most important person in his life, regardless of who he's romantically involved with. Whether you interpret their relationship to have incestuous overtones or not, they have a fascinating dynamic, and you captured it beautifully. Well done.

Adorable! Please continue this story! :)

:D

This is great, and I would love to read more.

That was a really cute story.