Reviews for Lone Surprises |
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![]() ![]() ![]() sweet story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha, this cracked me up. This is probably the funniest oneshot I've read. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() so cute!:' |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhh i loved it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE it! |
![]() ![]() Nice story!I really enjoyed it~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love It. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesomeness! O_o i'm jealous of you! x3 love this fic! 5 starrz~! yours truly, always kawaii, XxAnoniimouSxX |
![]() ![]() ![]() -" I was looking forward to reading this but i end up reading it late .' I feel like such a bad friend XD I loved the disclaimer XD *giggle giggle* “And I wanted to give you a present, so here you go,” Mikan widened her eyes, eying him back. “A-a present…?” Natsume nodded his head, raising his eyebrow. “Don’t you girls call this kind of present ‘romantic’ or something?” Mikan blinked. “Uhh…y-yeah, but—” Natsume interrupted her again by sealing her lips with a gentle kiss. He broke their lips apart after a few seconds and left a small gap between them. “Well then,” he said, his lips still turned into a smirk, his voice soft. “Merry Christmas.” Mikan stared at the male, not believing what he did. But then, her lips turned into a smile itself as her heart began to pound faster than at first, happy about what Natsume did. Still blushing, she nodded her head slowly. “Yeah…” she replied softly, her cheeks still turned into a deep red. “Merry Christmas to you, too.” And with that, she wrapped her arms around his neck again and closed the small gap between them. - KAWAII! D Sorry for the delayed review! Ayako/Ai :) P.S~ SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Longer - better. I liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! It's so cute! It couldn't be more perfect! ... BUT WAIT! IT COULD! If you had kept whatever parts you had cut out, than maybe, but we don't know yet. OOH! I know what you could do! Just write one without anypeices cut out and call it 'Lone Surprises EXTENDED'! Good luck! XP Megiie-chan(RWC)~~ |
![]() ![]() OMG this was really Awesome~! This Was Definitely Cute And Funny At The Same Time, Sam. Good Job! I Will Talk To You Back On Chrunchyroll~~! XD -Usajr |
![]() ![]() WHE~! Het is al over 9 maar ik heb nu wel tijd om te gaan reviewen. sorry voor de late review dat wel. maar ik was druk. sorry TToTT maar ik vond het echt cute Marije. hoop dat je nog meer van dit soort verhalen schrijft. hvj! x 33 |
![]() ![]() lol that was really good, I actually enjoy reading it though I'm not a fan of GA xD well done! And merry christmas! |
![]() ![]() awh! It was SO good :] I'm jealous of your writingg xP |