Reviews for Timing
TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
hahahahahaha! that would have been priceless XD
Demon Flame chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
that would have been epic! I can just picture garp laughing right along with him and sengoku snapping at garp to shut up.
GreenCAT the second chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
scared me there for a second.
BeyondMyReach chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Hahaha

The crazy Ds

Luffy grinned like a idiot when he was about to be executed and now his older brother fell asleep!

I really love that family
Nox Inviticus chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This...this is hilarious! Ahahaha, really nice idea, especially at such a tense moment in the story. By the way, would you mind if I draw a comic using your story as a script? I'll credit and link you...with your permission that is. :D?
yay101 chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
lol love it
cagna chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
i wonder do they still execute him then or wait till he wakes up? that is hillarious either way.
Gir Crazy chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
That is hilarious. XD I had totally forgoten about Ace's habit of falling asleep randomly. Nice work!
Citrus Sunscreen chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Oh gosh, that is so Ace I don't even know what to say. xD
ibelieveinahappilyeverafter chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Hahaha! I love this! It is really well done, drabble is still a fic too! That is so true, Ace's narcolyspy causes him to fall asleep in the most random places, and in situations that he should stay awake in haha! Very well done. I love Luffy's reaction as laughter too haha! Wonder what the marines thought of that...Very well done, I hope you make more things like this!
xt1me chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Brilliant :D
Tweedlelou chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Aww! It's simple and cute; worth leaving a review and worth favoring! I loved it :) Simple drabbles like yours makes me sleep a whole lot better! Thanks for making this!
roo17 chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Aw man, leave it to Ace to fall asleep during his execution! XD

I loved it :)
penniless1 chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Hilarious! Here I go thinking it would be serious and you pull an Oda on me. Nicely written by leaving the humor to the second-last line.
MythicalNights chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
LOL I could see this happening, even thought this was short I can't help but love it : ) They make narcolepsy so hilarious, I wonder if Dragon had it since Garp has it. I wonder if Gold Roger had it o_O, it's hard to imagine the pirate king falling asleep so suddenly. That would be hilarious.

L8r

MiSS
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