LOVED the little message that came with the sand dollar :)

this was really nice, i'm a little mystified as to why it doesn't have more reviews... Helga seems just right, and i really like the part about knocking. This was a lovely thing to read, I'm really glad I found it. I think the flow is okay, maybe a little clunky - and try to avoid the cliche of 'being choked with emotion' and referring to characters as 'the redhead'. Otherwise I thoroughly enjoyed this keep up the great work!

Another great one.

Keep the good writing.