This is the beginning of a great story! Your writing style captured the readers interest immediately. I hope you are well, as you have mentioned having some injuries and a very busy schedule. I've read the reviews and I hope you are encouraged by them enough to complete this story. Thank you for giving us great reading.

Update ?

So, I know next Friday has come and gone, but this a really great story that I can't wait to read! Not many people write a good Gen. Lane, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what his character does and says. Please keep writing!

Even though there's only two chapters up I love this story already! I know it's been a while but I'm really hoping that you come back to this one :)

Interesting story. Can't wait to read what happens next.

ROFL Awkward. XD Very nice, I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait for more. :)

Love the story so far...It's getting interesting after only two chapters.

I see you've fallen off of your updating schedule again. I hope you update soon :)

znother wonderfup chapter! keep 'em coming, dear! :)

Interesting idea and a good storyline, it reads great and the characters are close to the show's. Keep it up, it looks to be a great story.

Know how you feel, we've been without the net for well over a week and I'm trying to catch up too. Amazing chapter! Loving it, can't wait for more! Hoping to see more on Seven Deadly Sins soon!

I love this story! You have every characters personality down. I can't wait intill Firday!

Love it and can't wait for more!

good chapter & more please

LOL! I can just imagine Clark's blatant look of fear when the cop said that. :P

And their banter? You've got that down. ;) ;D

Oh, Lois... how I love you. I do the same things she does, like the pen in her mouth. ;) :hug:

It's like I'm reading an episode! This is amazing, Taylor! Oh, one thing though... "White snake" the group is one word: "Whitesnake". ;)

Hmm, I wonder what's happened to the JL with the exception of Ollie and Clark... maybe General Lane's group has them. ?

Lois Lane, you rock! 8-)

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I love how Clark didn't want to stop, but as soon as he saw it was the General at the door, he straightened himself up. :P

I wonder what Sam has to say... maybe Clark will be warned about what's going on. This is outstanding like I knew it would be! I can't wait for Friday for another reason now! ;)

Clois Forever!

What a great story! I find this mystery and plot to be so excellent. I can't wait to read the update next week!