I think this is my favorite avatar fanfic. I've read it many times before. I love that you based Jake on your own cousin. It adds a layer of authenticity.

This was a very enjoyable story, and I'm glad that you didn't fall into the trap of trying to give us the "Hustler-inspired" view of Jake and Neytiri's most intimate encounters...I think some things are best left to our (very fertile, pardon the pun!) imaginations...

Again, this is definitely a GREAT addition to the story in the movie!

This chapter added a lot of depth to the story...I'm rooting for Norm to become one of the People!

So far, this is really great! It has the feeling of just what I would think that Jake and Neytiri would both be thinking at this point, and I can't wait to start Chapter Two!

hi. I know it's been a long time since u wrote this, but it's amazing

Great job

Brilliant story :-D

such a great read would have liked to know what happened to norm, or just have trudy live hehe

really loved it!

you are good witter and this story was awesome :) Thakl you

Incredible story great job!

I love this story. This is my second time reading it. Possible also my second review. I recommend this to all AVATAR lovers.

Just read through all four chapters again; can't believe it's been three years since it got published... I said this back then as another username, and I'll say it again: Holy sh** on an altar, that was a good read.

The characterization, the dialogue, the emotion, the Jake/Neytiri chemistry, the overall "Pandora is awesome" atmosphere - I STILL don't know what you did, but "I See You" captures perfectly both Avatar and almost everything I love about it. In my books, you're right up there with Scott Washburn, Xenobia, Amaya & Xeal II - even better, because this fic is completed!

So great job, and thanks - I've got another reason to say why this is a great movie.

PS: ((Stage whisper) How's that follow-up you promised coming along?)

Thank you so much for writing this! I loved it. And I will definitely go try to watch Avatar again, though I don't have the DVD and I doubt any of my family want to watch it yet again from Netflix:(

I think you portrayed Jake's paraplegic and insecurity issues really well in this story.

Nice story - thank you for writing it.

Irayo! You have captured the story beautifully, the bringing together of two different races, and how one entity brought them together in love! The Na'vi will live on forever in our hearts, and I pray everyday that the Na'vi are in fact real, out there in Alpha Centauri, watching the planet Polyphemus rising in the night sky.

Eywa Naghu!