| Reviews for First Love |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2019 Ryu and Kasumi are six years apart not 8 years apart. Ryu would be 23 and Kasumi would be 17 |
| Alec Cao chapter 13 . 3/20/2019 What does your TDS Mean? |
 Besweet chapter 14 . 8/1/2015 Love it love it! such an intense hot story. Glad Irene was out of the picture, shes nice and all but she just doesnt fit to be a ninja wife. Shes more a big city kinda girl, shes to American for Ryu and i dont mean that in a bad way just to big of ultures differences, doesnt mean that Ryu can disrespect her though.. at least they end it in a way where it made sence. Ryu seemed bit to obsessive of Kasumi, he kinda scares me a little but again great story:) |
| LittleMissyGalPal chapter 14 . 7/22/2015 Yay, you completed this story! I loved this chapter and it's definitely my favourite. I'm so glad that Ryu and Kasumi are able to be together now and they finally have their happy ending. The way you portrayed Kasumi is really different compared to the other fics I've read, but after everything she's been through, who can really blame her. I really like it and I'm so happy you updated. Overall, you did well on this story. Bravo. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/21/2015 Yay finally |
| paqotote chapter 13 . 1/14/2014 Nice when are you going to update. |
| MarioMan247 chapter 13 . 11/13/2013 Really good stuff. I personally think the chapters are TOO SHORT! a few suggestions: 1) Add more of Kasumi's inner thoughts. 2) How is Ryu coping with all this? 3)What's happening with Irene My other suggestion, if you want increased tension, use Ayane. Ayane could screw over and make things more difficult for Irene and Kasumi. Also you could have Ayane and Ryu pretend to be together to make the other girls jealous. Or maybe the "Ayane is Kasumi's sister; close enough" for a few chapters. Love your stuff. Keep on writing. MarioMan247 |
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/5/2013 Wow I have t read this in forever! But I love it! I was so happy to find it updated! |
| LolaTheSa chapter 12 . 9/11/2013 So just because he fucked a women he possibly cared for means she has to have meaningless sex with some guy who she doesn't even know? Just to get even? Just to spite him? Now I'm not sure if i even want to read next chapter. |
| ggg chapter 12 . 9/1/2013 Fucl u... Ruin your goddamn fic is waa ya did |
| Emz D chapter 1 . 7/24/2013 God I never wanted a juicy lemon soooo bad. Great cliff hanger! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/19/2013 Aw! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/8/2013 you choose it's your story not's ours |
| susan chapter 2 . 5/7/2013 how's about the bright of light the singer is pink |
| 2 Lucky chapter 13 . 4/25/2013 This is, as always, entertaining. I'm mad that I got to a computer fast enough to see the 'hidden chapter,' but it couldn't be helped, so I want to see that. Also... I'm speechless. Good job! |
