Thank you for a very enjoyable chapter.

Translations — are not necessary at the END of a chaptter when you translate straight after foreign words are spoken THROUGHOUT the chapter. This may help ease your stress levels.

So um... Who the hell is who? Have harry and whoever really been on middle earth for hundreds/thousands of years? Or have they been transported over there, or... I mean, what the hell is going on?

Their eyes would gleam when light is on them and one catches their gaze. Anyone seeing a cat's eyes at the right angle knows of what I speak..

Great story

children in rivendell?

The concept of this is good. The characters selected for this are good. The execution I found a little shaky. It seems impossible to determine Calenur's motives, or indeed those of any of the Nahamionr.

Hey there just just picked up this storry at random at 5 AM

Extremely gripping first chapter, i absolutely love that little portrayal of Ron and Hermione
Completely gripped me, the sort of moment when he brings tears to your eyes
Can't wait to right now pick it up again

loved it

This story is okay.

it is a very interesting begining for a story and well written.

That was quite good. My only complaint was the rapidly swelling number of nahamionr, and even that was minor. I look forward to starting to read the second book. It seems it will be as interesting as the first, and I do like that the story seems to be following the storyline of the movies but at the same time giving it its own edge. It's well done.

Kanathia

I am having a very good time reading this! You have done a very good job writing charecters changing. They are still themselves, you make the change natural. Is Ethycs a set of knives?

*looks you in the eye* Will you marry me?

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*slow grin spreads across face* Can I accept a non-answer as a yes?

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No? Pity. I absolutely love how your mind works. This is by far the most entertaining LOTR crossover I've found. Can't name another good one at the moment actually. Could you suggest anything?

All I can say is that I hope for a swift sequel, ask where the other Nahamlonr are, and say that I love the fact Boromir is alive.

I didnt realize that it spelled scythe backwards. I just say it pronounced as Ethics and took into account your Dracos personality and the fact it couldnt be a bow, staff, or sword and came out with a scythe. That and I wanted to see one in his hands. Not really sure why.