Eeeeeee you need to write a honeymoon sequel!

THIS WAS SO CUTE. Start to finish. I went in a little tentatively because I've kind of avoided the 'arranged marriage' scenario in Ohshc stories so far, but I was so pleasantly surprised by the way you handled the situation and the little dynamics in their earlier relationship.

SO GOOD! I love finding a good read! I could barely contain my giggles through chapters 4-6 (which was an issue with someone sleeping next to me). I found it a very interesting choice how you handled the build up in their feelings- I definitely expected more physical tension when it came to kissing and the shower scenes (Multiple shower scenes. You are bolder than I and I love it!). It was a take on relationship build up that I haven't seen much of before, and I think with an arranged marriage situation such as this one, where it's so heavily based in business, it worked beautifully. It was refreshing to see a new take on that!

Enjoyable read :) The end hit me a little rushed, but I think endings always feel that way. Thanks for the story!

BWAHAHAHA! I totally love this. OMG.

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
this is soooo cute! I love it!

Gah! This is lovely! Gah! *has fangirl spasms*

Love it can you please wright a sequel!

It's so well done, I don't want it to end

That was great!
Hikaru just got owned by Kyoya!

cutest fanfic ever!

You should write a sequel. This fanfic is really good!

I just read this in a day! This was a wonderful story...I wish there was more!

simply beautiful. Brava!

I can't believe that it's already over! This was brilliant. I adored it. And those two do make a really nice couple!

I also really liked how realistic it was, their love for the other developed at such a good rate.

Well done with this.

*sigh* Wow, wow I am completely satisfied. I've never tried this pairing before and I'm glad I read this story as a starter. Can you write a sequel to this? I'd be glad if you did, but you don't have to write it.

I am greatly entertained. I love the idea; it's brilliant!