Reviews for The First Breath |
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Slytherin Princess Nysa chapter 13 . 3/9/2019 Someone punch peter |
Slytherin Princess Nysa chapter 8 . 3/7/2019 It’s messed up how Peter is allowed to do whatever he wants and be with whoever he wants but he still controls Bella, and even though Jasper is supposed to be his best friend he still plays mind games |
jen5795 chapter 19 . 4/9/2018 Love this story! |
Charlie0925 chapter 19 . 3/13/2017 Loved this brilliant fic! Great writing here honey! ;o) |
Vwchick chapter 19 . 9/2/2016 I usually stay away from the AH jasper/Bella bit I'm so So happy I read this one! So going in my fav list! It was beautiful I love it! Thank you for writing and sharing this with all of us here on FF- it's a beautiful love story |
Guest chapter 17 . 3/10/2015 Aww! At last! |
WolfGoddess chapter 19 . 10/1/2014 That's sort of cute. |
luvtwilight14 chapter 19 . 3/27/2014 Very very sweet story yet too too short ! It's hard to find AH jasper/Bella fics and I want them to last forever! Ha. Thanks for sharing! Hugs Stephanie |
The swedish girl chapter 19 . 2/4/2014 Fuckin' brilliant story :-) |
missmelly chapter 18 . 1/12/2014 Well, this is just astonishing. It's good enough to be published. I devoured it over the course of the weekend and I will favorite it for reading again. |
LizziePaige chapter 19 . 11/11/2013 Loved, loved, loved this story. Your writing was very descriptive, particularly the early chapters surrounding Charlie's death. When you wrote about Jasper seeing Bella for the first time, and her breaking down in the driveway, I felt as if I was there seeing it with my own eyes. Thanks so much for this story and for this wonderful also enjoyed your usage of some of the lesser characters from the twilight series taking a major role in this story, and the absence of the "usual gang" - great job! :) |
An Avid Reader Forever chapter 19 . 5/22/2013 great story |
manchester.girl chapter 19 . 3/31/2013 This was truly amazing. Loved the plot and the development. Probably the best Jasper x Bella story I've read on here. Good job |
honeybun37876 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 how nice of jasper to look after peter |
BeachRosey chapter 19 . 12/26/2012 Great story. Its the second of yours I've read. I usually only read E/B but you make me love B/J! |