Reviews for Dan Is A Nut |
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Lucella chapter 1 . 3/18/2015 am i the last |
Consulting Fangurl chapter 1 . 8/27/2013 Haha this was funny! Great story! |
Raven60299 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012 :) hehehehe... That was short but hilarious, I can't stop grinning. :) :) :) |
The Lazy Bookworm chapter 1 . 6/9/2012 *blinks* *blinks blinks* LOL This is so random and funny nice |
The Girl of the Moon chapter 1 . 5/24/2011 Oy vey zmir? like the Yddish for "Oh boy"? |
TobiIsSexy chapter 1 . 5/24/2011 hahahahahahahahaha LOL! ha you made me laugh really hard :) I just LOVE Dan. |
TribalGirl chapter 1 . 5/7/2011 hahahhahahahahahaha ha. |
the39clueslover chapter 1 . 12/21/2010 Hahahahahahahahahahahaha! That is really funny! I can imagine Dan doing all of those things! |
MrsWizard98 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010 I really like this story and I think you have really good grammer :D I hope to see more of you ~Mrs Wizard 98 |
Klbooks chapter 1 . 10/22/2010 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Okay, that was funny. I really didn't see any mistakes, so good job. The fake rifle reminds me of my own lil' bro, he keeps on talking about a big stick he'll keep under his bed. So, you captured little boys' antics really well. :) And the Saladin one was hilarious, loved it. :) |
The Whisper of Wings chapter 1 . 10/12/2010 This oneshot's only flaw is its shortness. As this documents Dan's antics, I would have liked it to be longer - maybe a few more exploits? But as it is, it captures Dan's "nutty", risque side quite accurately. I don't think Dan is OOC - he seems to be In Character, and I applaud you for that. Also, you have a very direct, straight to the point way of writing, which is clear and simple enough for your readers to understand. Good job, and best of luck in both writing and life, ~Wings~ |
Cascading Rainbows chapter 1 . 10/11/2010 HAHA. :D Nice. PBG. Pros: Dan's characterization was done very well. Spelling was great. Hilarious. ;D Cons: You are using my pet peeve. It's not: "I'm trying to capture a pet squirrel." Dan responded. It's: "I'm trying to capture a pet squirrel," Dan responded. I think Amy should say "it's" instead of "it is" when she's talking about the five dollar rifle. XD Great humor fic here. 8/10. ~Joyce |
ShootinStar chapter 1 . 10/9/2010 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA TO THE POWER OF INFINITY! that was DEFINTELY creative, with the OOC! I LOVED IT! |
xXAlleyXCatXx chapter 1 . 4/1/2010 lol,and yes, i live in many fandoms including NCIS,PJO,39 clues, KH, and a few more i can't name right now because i'm leaving for vaca soon. |
AquaLily1 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010 HAHAHAHAHA! 'It's Saladin in disguise!' You are HILARIOUS! Dan is exactly the way he's supposed to be... |