This is awesome! I honestly love this story so much! Can't wait to continue reading the next chapters as they come, I'm excited already. Keep up the good work!

You're a great writer. The little details in this story really make it worth the read and keeps it all in a good mood.

Eiji is actually a pretty mature pre seventh grader

Nice opening. It really captures the attention! And the characters seem in character to me.

Oh my Eiji can be jealous.

I want golden pair romance!

Ack! I'm so glad you're writing again! Thank you so much for putting the time and effort for your fics, they really are amazing.

MOAR MOAR MOAR! Greatest PoT story I've read yet! I just LOVE Fuji, he's always been my favorite character, the moment I laid eyes on him (even though I thought he was a girl at first...), I just had a feeling that he would be my favorite! I can't wait for the next chapter, *cough, which needs to come soon, cough* but don't stress yourself over it!

PHEW! I FINALLY CAUGHT UP AFTER 20 CHAPTERS! .

Okay. So. I really like this story :D

It just makes me want to read it for hours and hours x.x (:

But I can't help but think, from the very beginning,

if this is Eiji's assignment to write about his life,

GOSH. THIS MUST'VE TAKEN LONG TO WRITE.

and for Ryoma,(if he reads it), that's gonna take a while to read.. LOL

Oh well Now time to wait for the next chapter :P

LOLOL! nice! tho definitely has been awhile. i think this chapter is fine the way it is and that's good that you have eiji's character mastered!

I enjoy the lyrics to the song you posted. I enjoy them very much.

Have you seen the vlog series Brotherhood 2.0? Because...um...It's pretty awesome.

I feel like a stalker because this chapter was only posted a few minutes ago.

I like Eiji and how he bought the milkshakes. XD He's adorable.

Hi, Have Socks. Major props to you for taking the incentive to finish the story. There's nothing more disappointing than a forever-incomplete story, especially when it's one as lighthearted and fun to read as this one. I'm a big sucker for family-related stories within this fandom just because the series doesn't focus on it AT ALL. I mean seriously, these are supposed to be middle schoolers (though they are 6' giants built like Olympic athletes). I like reading your take on Kikumaru's big fun family, and his school life, and his friendship with Fuji, his friends outside the Seigaku team, etc,etc.

Hope this encourages you to get some creative brain juices flowing, because I'm really curious about that Fuji drama you mentioned. And maybe you might even be inspired by Kikumaru's amazing baking ability (you don't remember, you say? That episode when he wins a visit from his favorite girl pop-star group? He feigns sickness and his family leaves for the beach, and he bakes a gorgeous chocolate cake? ;D )

Your no loser,man I'm late!this was updated last year,man I feel dumb! Great job ;D

Ps that's a long word u learned from Arthur

Haha, a world of OCs indeed... :)

And of course Eiji has to be popular! Who wouldn't love him? ;)

Great chapter! It did seem a bit filler, but I can recognize the plot development, so it's all good . Can't wait for the next update!

*~tsukiko~*

Merry New Years.

ANYWAYS

Why is it that I can see Miki giving him raspberry chocolates just for the sake of being memorable in veritable litany of chocolate that he must eat...

I've decided that she's now my favorite character.

I must go and we must hang out soon.

~PC