Reviews for Paraíso |
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Bad-Wolf chapter 1 . 1/3/2012 Yeah, secret boyfriend, Amanda? Ya sure that's not Rutland? This was really well written, and it expands on Amanda's character a lot more than in Legend or Underworld. But... Lara killed " an Atalantean god" (BLOODY NATLA!) after this, didn't she? Chronologically speaking. So, really, she shouldn't be talking about that little trip, huh? |
simsbabii chapter 1 . 2/4/2010 Hm... I say it is James. Because James is a sexy creature. Haha I love endings like those. |
bahleeeted chapter 1 . 1/6/2010 Nicely written story! Amanda and Lara both seem in character for that timeframe, though I'm confused on the timing... I thought TR1/TRA happened shortly after that incident. *scratches head* either way, nice story! |
Artisa chapter 1 . 1/4/2010 LOL it was cute, seriously! I really liked it! _ My favourite bits were: "I can't sleep." "I can, so shush!" "Do you like any boys? Do you like any girls?" "I'm British, we don't have crushes, we fancy people!" XD Well written! (except where you accidentally wrote Larra lol) and I loved how you portrayed Amanda as someone normal and likeable, and her friendship with Lara was shown really well! *thumbs up* But don't you think 18's a little too young to be going on archeological digs? :P |
Alizorah chapter 1 . 1/4/2010 Haha, this seems so legit! I can totally see Amanda being this way when she was younger- she WAS a bit of a gossip-mouthed hippy-type person, eh? :-P I liked this a lot, and I loved the bantering she and Lara had- just like their biography said, they had friendly bickers amongst each other back at university. And I immediately thought you were hinting at Rutland when you mentioned her "secret boyfriend". ;-) Nice job, it was short, but it gave me a little smile and a good laugh. D |
Fragments of Time chapter 1 . 1/4/2010 lol, I can see this happening, actually. Younger Amanda was pretty childish. xD |