Well, that was a trip with a depressing ending. I liked it though

Oooh, that middle one, Jim sticking it to his mom- beautiful.

Your story at the end, about reviews, was beautiful as well

Wow, that got very dark. I know you said at the beginning that you didn't like it, but I thought it was written very well

I love Bones ' rules.

I really like Bones threatening Spoke, so cute!

Bones doesn't ever thank Spock, not outright, but he shows his appreciation in the extra effort he puts in his insults just for him, and Spock gets it.

The I really like that line.

My goodness, this was serious and depressing, but I enjoyed it

Aw, good for Bones. I liked the "insults him properly" part.

I like this continuation of the first chapter! And it's sweet

The naked one- so great! Especially because I never got an answer! So funny!

Wow, this is intense. I'll admit, I haven't seen much of the orginional TV show (which is something I'm trying to fix), so I don't know much about Winona, except what's I read in fics, where she tends to be abusive or neglectful. So, when I started reading this, I didn't want to like you. But you changed my mind with your writing, and you style. For this little chapter, you changed my mind and made me not hate her.

I really liked Uhura's take. Do think Kirk is crazy, but very dangerous and protective, and I like fics to go along with it.

And the line" how the stupid bastard couldn't even figure out how to breathe." Greatly amused me.

How beautiful. I love Bones' characterization. And you're so funny! Beautiful writing

I love this so much, especially those last few lines, just great!

why

why do you hate me so much?