this is probably one of the cutest and sweetest stories i've ever read and what a ride this was to read! I laughed, I shed a tear or two, I grinned so hard my cheeks hurt while reading this. I loved it! x

This was an amazing, amazing read. I laughed (far too many times to keep count), cried (especially when they broke up), screamed in excitement (especially during the florida surprise and the last baseball match). I loved the ending and the last few lines. Swirl and Daisy just won my heart. I so want to read more. I want to know about their college life, married life, their families and future adventures. In short I just want this story to keep going on forever, but I know that that is not possible as every great thing has to come to an end one day, and this was definitely one great read. Thank you so so much for writing this masterpiece and thank you for giving us Swirl and Daisy. They were perfect!

Oh my, they are too cute! I have love the ups and downs of this story from start to end.

Beautifully written and amazing characters.

You leave me wanting more of these to, wanting to make sure that their lives need as perfectly as this chapter did.

Your are my new superstar!

This chapter made me cry a little. Love them so much. They are an amazing couple that even though they are a little muddled. They know what to do to help themselves.

Oh. Em. Gee! (had to steal this from Alice hehehe)

Soo I jus finished reading the pdf version. And, well, it was absolutely amazing. cute. breathtaking. sweet. did i say cute already? because it was. i loved it.

Also, to be fair, this whole geek approach was something close to my my heart (i'm not a 100% geek, i'd say i'm more of blend, but i do love a good sci-fic). And who does not love a good young love story? their break up over Lotr and Hp was just comical - and something that just fit the story perfectly.

personally, i am a HUGE potterhead and i totally related to Bella in some moments, specially with the tidy bits of her admissions essay. it is crazy how you captured what i felt in similar moments of my life and how i, also, related them to HP. it is a strange feeling, and each time i go back to HP it feels like reconnecting with and old very beloved friend and with parts of my younger self. I haven't completely parted ways. it has become a hobby, something i love, but not something i am overly obsessed about anymore. growing up sucks. but it is also amazingly blissful.

also, i think you did a great job with empowering Bella. throughout the story, it did feel like her dream had become to fulfill edward's and she had so much potential. i loved how you made her rebel against it, own it and accept it. and also how edward could pin point the problem even when she was still consciously oblivious to it. and how she ended up proposing! aaaah. perfect for them.

thank you for this experience. for this story. for putting together something that was beyond cute. you are very talented and i am thankful u decided to share it with us.

ps: i LOVED LOVED LOVED carlisle's rendition that HP is about unconditional love, specially, a parent's unconditional love (i am not one yet, but i do hope to have kids someday). words are not sufficient to describe how i felt during that scene. it is what i thought about when i re-read the books from a more adult point of view.
ps2: i've got lots lots of things more that i loved, not always related to HP, like edward asking permission to court bella, their first date (with ed as frodo), the diabolical plan, mrs evans, and many many more, but, well, i tend to be very verbose (according to google translate) and i do not mean to bore you writing about each scene that got to me. so, just wanted to let u know how i admire ur work with this. like i said, amazing.

Re reading this story. I remember pieces here and there so decided to re read. Bella Swan is everything LOL it warms my heart because she thought waiting to have sex until marriage was soooo easy! At that age I thought the same thing. I wanted the same thing. It's just too relatable. I love this couple.

just rereading this in teh midst of all that's happening in the world. read it from beginning to end, every single word. hvaen't read fanfic in a while and this story reminded me of how much i love these characters, your characters. wanted to leave my appreciation for. thank you for writing this!

excellent story :) thank you for sharing your words

Just read this all the way through and it was absolutely delightful! Thank you for sharing your wonderful story.

That was so sweet. Took me back to my high school days. You have completely captured what it's like to be a teenager, young and in love. Thanks for sharing this story! X

Sweetest story ever. It did me so much good in this bleak days. Thank you

13 anos q idade obscura jkkkk

mano agr to curiosa nessa história eles são vampiros pq tipo o menino vai ter 13 anos pra sempre?

13 mano 13

I don't even know what to say here. Do I gush about how imperfectly perfect your story is? Do I rage about how I'm not done with these two and I hate that you ended it here? Do I tell you about how I'll most definitely be rushing to your author page to see if there's a sequel? Or should I simply thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing a story that I genuinely loved reading? Thank you.