Wow that really really really sucks for konan to have such unsatisfying sex :(

Damn this is so sad, my heart cries out for both of them.

I love you die-hard Nagato/Konan fans. I'm one too! I'm just not interested in writing any. Ha! Please continue writing stories about them, college boy.

Wow this was written beautifully. The details, the story behind their life, it was all flawless. You did a great job with letting us be able to see and feel what they were feeling.

You really showed their belief that he was a god well. Even with captalizing "Him" and such. I'm guessing the whole thing is from their point of view and not really a narrative so I can see where that would tie in.

I'm glad you didn't throw them into a relationship where he isn't in the poor shape he's in. I'm glad you kept him the way he was..

Only thing I noticed is that you were doing this with diologue:

"Yes." He replies, much to her surprise.

Correct eay:

"Yes," he replies, much to her surprise.

A lot of authors make that mistake. The only time a period ends diologue is when nothing like "he replies" follows.

Other than that, this was a really well written great read. I enjoyed it and I plan on checking out any other work that you may have.

Signed,

DarkSacredJewelXoX

I like it~

Very in-character, and it seems likely to have happened. Good job~

Yayayay~