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honestly I like this story but it's been few years since you updated it, I wish you didn't abandoned this beautiful story tho

Are you going to update?

Continue

Cool! The tension between the two of them is definitely heating up... I liked how uou compared and contrasted Bruce Wayne to the Joker. Especially since Bruce is the Batman. The pizza part also made Harley seem a lot more human. Good. Barman can't love a crazy!

Anyways, I know it's been four years but please keep posting. I bet you've gotten better! ;)

Will Jojer come for Harley now? It'd be very climactic. She could yell NO.

Anyways, quick compliment. Good job with writing Harley's accent :) It's very realistic.

Poor Harley! Pregnant, alone, and insane... the way you potrayed her made ny heart ache. Oooh. Please please please post again (I know it's been 4 years though)

Ooooooh budding romance... how cute... I always thought Batman needed a bit more love in it. It's all violence and action (which is good, but only in moderation). Ya know.

The cookies part is amusing. And the part about Batman's social life doubly so. Also, I really like how you laid out why Batman wants Harkey to leave the Joker for good. It makes sense. :)

This is cool! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.

How curious, I like it. Hope you continue eventually

I don't get it, why did Bat's let him go

Love your story, it's awesome. Can't wait to read more :)