Wow. Perfectly in character, and your description is just so lush. I can feel every detail.

aaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
so sweet! :)

Amazing, beautiful work! I loved everything! Youre way of describing was so detailed, and so wonderful! :)

awesome job!

Wow, you write very good imagery. It's very vivid, but it gets lost a little bit where there is no action, mostly in the middle where Jasmine is contemplating and speculating. But overall, very, very good fic!

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This is one of the top ten (if not top five) best fanfictions I have ever read! It's amazing!

Wow. Just...wow. I can't even BEGIN to describe how amazing this story is! But let me try:

The writing is very deep and emotional, with a large enough vocabulary that brings that right kind of spice to the story, but not so many meaningless words and phrases that only exist in the dictionary that the writing sounds pompous and unintelligent (much like Stephanie Meyer's Twilight, if I'm not mistaken). The words you DID use, however, brought an immediate picture to the reader, and the writing is so...AMAZING!

Wow, I managed to sound like an English major until the last word of that paragraph...

But it truly is a beautiful piece of work. Not OOC, funny, cute, everything.

The only objectable part of this is that a Christian-type wedding is implied (what with the "I do." and "Til death do us apart"), and Aladdin and Jasmine are definitely Muslim, but that's the only flaw with this writing, and a very understandable one.

Plus, this is only your first story. Keep it up! :D

Now THAT is delicious writing.

Seriously man, this was a good read. It's amazing when I read things like this. This movie was nothing but a Disney movie to me when I was young. It's only when your older that you can explore all those unspoken possibilities, even in an animation that seems to be for kids. This was a wonderful look into their characters, as well as just the essence of human emotions like love and believing in such a thing as well. Beautiful work. I loved it. ;D

That was wonderful.

Incredible, actually.

Oh, I loved this. Wonderfully written and so very much in character for both of them.

this made me cry.

i loved it.

wow...well written.

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Very pretty and eloquent. It paints such a vivid picture in my head.

Nicely done.

Aw! That was so incredibly cute. No one writes Al/Jas anymore, and it makes me happy to see someone who can write it well.