Please update

I like the story but just so you know it's the hidden in the leaf Village not hidden Leaf City there are no street lights within the hidden in the leaf you can say the the lights of the restaurant that are outside the ramen bar created the lights there is no Street or red light district in the hidden Leaf Village you might want to watch some Naruto if you need references it might help to make it more believable regardless of how you justify it stories good don't get me wrong but when you stop putting street lights inside of hidden Leaf Village when you don't have any and I streets I just wanted to point out but this is a good story so don't get the wrong idea I'm just trying to help improve quality of story take it for what it is it's called constructive criticism but in the meantime I look forward to read it more this and I thank you

Great job

I have never understood why people want to merge Naruto and Kurama. In the first place, chakra is an energy that is constantly replenished so its impossible to absorb all of someone's chakra...

Shikaku should already have a plan in place along with tons of backups to ensure survival and success.

Shouldn't Fu have been able to stop such a small assault?

I was hoping Naruto would actually use some intense torture instead of his stupid dough stuff :/ I was also hoping he would take up Katanas in honor of his mom. On that note, shouldn't he know why seals are natural for him since he has her journals?

That last escape was cheap af. He was captured. Also, Shikaku is an idiot. Ino should be dead or permanently insane after he forced her to switch with Naruto. He has the Kyuubi inside him, it would attack Ino mercilessly.

Naruto is heavily over reacting about Minato... Also, why put Hinata with Shikamaru and Choji instead of Naruto? Hinata and Naruto would make a scary combination.

Hand signs should not still be a problem..

Why in the world would Ayame go on dates with random people if she believes Naruto to be her future husband? Is she that promiscuous?

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I like the story but you did an not me in some ways. Primarily how the Ichiraku ledger Shows negative and yet you have naruto who is dirt poor turn down his legacy. It's posses me off because he could have fixed that particular plot line.

I get not taking up the Namikaze name. But there is no reason he couldn't have the rest. It's a noting because to me it looks like a plot hole and a deliberate loose end that you did everything to tie up only to not do so. It makes several paragraphs in your story completely pointless now..

That said. I do like the story. At the same time though... I need to take a break cause of the inheritance thing. It's ... ugh. Well IL read the rest tomorrow. But dang I hope you don't do it again. :p

I really enjoyed this story. I hope you haven't given up on it. I was surprised you put an Akatsuki member in so soon. They didn't really start biju hunting till years after the chunin exams. Not complaining, just making an observation. I'm loving the relationship. That necklace has some nasty foreshadowing though lol.

Ugh, what an utter piece of crap this turned into. You have him graduate, then hand us an essentially canon Naruto/Iruka/Mizuki fight for the scroll crapfest.

Then you make Naruto the biggest morn on the planet by turning down all his father's/family's belongings, jutsu, money because he's butthurt his dad sealed the fox into him? When the alternative was the fox stomping baby Naruto or eating him or whatever, along with the rest of the village.

This when he ALSO knows he's got little to no money AND Teuchi has been going into deep debt just to help Naruto out? What a selfish, whiny little sack of shit your Naruto is.