it was beautiful i loved it

Aww. This was written really well...until Kurapika was revealed to be a lady. He is canonically male. I was definitely hoping that it would have tied with the mytholigical theme happening here and he was some sort of creature instead haha! Either way, the plot is interesting enough and I like the array of characters introduced so far.

Thank you, I read your story non stop! And I love the chapter where Kuroro take care of Kurapika and he carried her bridal style. The plot with Ishtar and mythological caracters and plot was very very well imagined and written. I so glad that I can read your story. I'm soooo sad that Kururo was not here when Kurapika (I think) was pregnant. I will appriciated to see Kuroro take care of her during her pregnancy and take care of his son. I'm so sad that they are not together! :'( I will read the sequel now, I' m so happy that you wrote it so fast! Thank you so puch to create a wonderful story like this where I can see Kuroro and Kurapika. It's so well written, I'm very happy.

:'( I want Kuroro and Kurapika together so bad... :' (

Kyaaa the end of chapter 12 is perfect! Kiss on his cheek, I love it so much XD

XD I love the idea of the unicorn and virginity XD

I loved this chapter and the evolution of Kuroro and Kurapika!

I love this story, it's very well written and I love the plot! I can't wait to read the others chapters! Thank youuu! Very good idea, I love the first chapter too. It's perfect! 3

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I still find myself coming back to this feed no matter how many times i’ve already read it. To me this is still the best HxH fic

this fic somehow became the foundation for a lot of HxH fanfic.

Loved this! It took awhile to adjust to the alternate route you created and the main characters personalities. But I'm glad I stuck with it because it was very fun. I did laugh at the thought of Kuroro riding a unicorn... I dont know why it struck my funny bone, but it did (ｰ). So really, thanks for the effort and time you took into making this. I look forward to your other works! (๑๑)

("I'm seeing a glow-in-the-dark horse with a horn, which I've heard is called a Unicorn." Killua declared.) Glow-in-the-dark-horse! That was spot on Killua!
Ahahahah ｡･ﾟ(ﾟ ヮ ﾟ)ﾟ･｡

you deserve more review and like.

First of all, I'm so sorry that you've had to deal with all these self entitled twat heads. Second, I read this story and it's sequel when I first discovered this site some years ago, and I want you to know that your series got me deep into shipping KuroKura and it helped inspire me to write my own stories. I was so happy to find this Fic still up on this site so I could write this! Some of the fics I read then aren't here anymore, unfortunately. Now, to end this long review, I just want to say thank you!