Only Neal could get into so much trouble on a lunch break. Peter’s agony at Neal’s pain was really good, but I especially loved how he knew when it was time to start teasing.

Very nice. I was mad at Hughes for assuming the worst, but it's very true to character and the story.

poor neal! that was really sweet though!

Yay! Just the kind of fic I need after the heartbreak that was this week's episode. I love Neal Using His Skills For Good, and when you can fit some whump in there too it's marvellous.

Is the "sweet spot" thing working from personal experience? I hope not, dislocated shoulders always sound horrific.

Haha cute!

Very good.

omg, that was too sweet! fantastic job!

Lovely!

This was simply awesome and one of the best WC fanfics I have EVER read! Thank you for posting. The characterizations of both Peter and Neal, as well as that of Hughes, was spot-on! You are a genius!

I love a good hurt/comfort story and this was great! I love how Peter reacted to Neal's pain and how much he helped him out while waiting for the paramedics to come!3

Wow! Poor Neal! How Painful! I Remember Dislocating My Shoulder, It Was For Barely A Minute, But It Still Hurt Like Hell! I Can't Imagine How Long It Must Have Taken Neal To Go Through Those Shafts 6 Times, & The Amount Of Pain He Must Have Been In. God I Think I Would Have Died!

Wonderful. Neal's angst is soo angsty. Neal in so much pain. Poor Neal. Thank you for bringing Peter into the Picture. Determined to hold his uncomfortable position for Neal's sake, even give Hugh 'insubordinate' look (Haha). And Neal worry about offending Hughes, and Hughes rolling his eyes. And Jones and Cruz catching Peter's fall at the ready. They're all wonderful team mates.

Aw, how cute! It got a little confusing during some parts, but I love your writing style! and the plot? It's to die for!

This was wonderfully written, the growing relationship between Neal and Peter spot on. Peter and Neal may have their differences, and Neal may get on his handler's nerves sometimes (a lot really... ). But Peter is always there to pull him out of a tight spot...

Nahaliel