I can't believe I didn't come across this story sooner! I've only read the first chapter so far, and it's awesome! Your writing is so descriptive and captivating, and I am definately going to read the rest Fantastic work with this:D

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Leave it to you to deliver something like this. Impressive. Maybe this, as well as Sonic Phantom's recent update, can get me back in action. I've gotta start Chapter 7 over, though, because I got a new laptop a couple of months back, and I haven't been able to transfer my old data to this one. But, maybe that'll help too. I await the next chapter.

Great job on this chapter man. You did an amazing job and it was indeed an awesome read. Way to go on a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one. :)

Phew, that was a long one. Man Force, that was one epic chapter I give you that. Everything in this chapter was good, the battles the diologue, everything. Your chapters inspire me, perhaps I might start envying you even more, Force. I wait for the next chapter.

Nice chapter and both fight was great but if there one thing I got to ask is that did cyrus really think he can beat quimica, mina, rena, and smash when he weakened and outnumbered because I think they could take him.

I extremely enjoyed this chapter! :D Great job, Force. There were a few word misspellings, such as damanging(damaging). Easy to fix. Your grammar is becoming noticeably better!

Aw crap. I forgot about Chaos and his merry band. One battle ends but a new one is on the horizon. Update soon

Very nice build up to the battle with Oliver. Awesome job. Can't wait to see the next chapter. :D

Aww no, Shadow! That was an Epic battle! Had me on edge dude!Hopefully Shadow will get a rematch though, the ultimate lifeform must prevail!

Thank you

Thank you

The only thing worse than a psychopathic maniac with god-like powers is a psychopathic maniac with god-like powers that can't control them. Cue epic fight music. Update soon

Man, you don't know long I waited for this chapter!

Oilver White, boy is that kid crazy or what, taking the power of Gaia meaning that the heroes are f***ed big time but is end up losing his mind and attacking everything in sight. Asui is one tough kitty I give her that but can she actually be Cyrus? Guess I would hae to find out sooner or later so update!

To be honest, I've been able to picture the personalities of your OCs better now, than I was when you first introduced them. Your writing is evolving, and becoming much more complex and well done. Good job, dude. Now the story is really heating up, who would've thought that Oliver would be over-taken like that. Surely he would've planned something to control that power - I guess not? :P

Something to address that I saw in here that could be fixed.

["Well, that's quite simple actually." Oliver answered casually.]

Here you used a period after your speech, where it should have been a comma.

"Well, that's quite simple actually," Oliver answered casually."

We use a comma because the speech is still apart of the sentence. However, the use of a period after dialogue is used, but only when an action is described before or after. For example:

[Sonic growled, like an enraged beast. "I'm going to kill you!"]

Something like that.

(I used that one sentence as an example, I noticed the same mistake throughout the chapter)

Anyways, I'm really enjoying where this story is heading. Seeing Shine and Havoc recover is especially exciting! Can't wait for the next part, bro!

Speech is treated like a sentence, so we use a comma. (

nicely done, can't say I saw what happer to Oliver coming but now that I think of it I should have.