HOLY SHIT

SHE JUST... HOLY SHIT

better character development than the actual series wow holy shit, this was such a pleasant experience

this was a serious-ish chapter but

I just can't stop laughing at "cum-sponge"

Yoruichi pls, listen to Unohana "Mom Friend" Retsu

I really enjoyed this first chapter! It's also very informative and taught me something that I didn't know about before.

Read the whole thing in one go, and I loved every minute of it!

That was not what i expected when i started, but i was very pleasantly surprised! All in all the only thing i could have wished to change would have been more of Urahara, but that is just because he is my favorite. I loved the way you added Renji and Ichigo, especially seeing them act as friends, and you did a really amazing job putting Yoruichi and Soifon into a new situation. All in all, awesome!

I really liked the story. i finished it in two sessions of 1 hour and 2 hours nearly straight after eachother.
Im also going to read Every Time I Make a Girl Cry now for sure. :) I hope that is just as good or even better then this one. :)

Thx for an amazing story. :) WT

Err... what did yoruichi just do?

LOL

This is great read. I'm a late bloomer for Bleach and Yoruichi and Soi were only second in my most favorite women of said anime, my first is Matsumoto of course! But I really enjoyed this story of yours.

Congrats for finishing and thanks for sharing!

But hey, if a nympho is as beautiful, as sexy and as hot as yoruichi, I wouldn't mind being a nympho with her!

I imagine Yoruichi being given something to increase prolactin synthesis to decrease sexual urge, but then it will make her lactate and Yoruichi would need someone to breast feed on her, and the cycle starts again! Ahahahaha.

It seems Yoruichi is really in a tight situation. Oh and about the part where women were labeled whores for wanting sex all the time while men being praised for it? I totally agree. In this world, women are supposed to be "boring" to be called morally acceptable. (shakes head)

And darn moral values aren't even universal, it varies since it is based on norms made by humans who are imperfect and immoral. For all we know, they made these norms to cover up the things they do that they think are disgusting (but can't stop doing!).

Okay, I haven't started reading yet, I just saw the summary and I got the need to write a review before reading.

Hypersexual activity... meaning a disease where there's overflowing secretion of dopamine and endorphins, ehehehehe! I think this disease suits Yoruichi! (I wonder what could be a good term for this? -made thinking pose-)

I'm excited to read... so I better.

thank you god!

oh shit! this is total drama

I love this story. I read this story all in a day, was realy good. Your story have great detail and I like the personality of yorusoi.

I must say I truly enjoyed this story. There's still plenty of spelling/ typos you need to go back but overall it was a grest ride. :)