love the fic, but now that I'm looking back I feel like the wholeone man team" thing was a little much. maybe you couda put him on a team with some filler characters and a filler jonin and let them get killed, and have Naruto promoted in field

I usually don't take to commenting on a person's work if I didn't like it but fuck it, it seems I need to do this.

One, Your story is good with the grammer and pacing, no doubts about it but the concept itself is completely illogical and deviates from the essence that is Naruto. You just wrote that Naruto suffers from PTSD due to child rape and expect that would compensate the entire novel to be realism?Bullshit!
I can ignore the fact that you made Naruto a one man cell no matter how stupid that sounds(Kakashi was chunin way before he was put in a 4 man cell), I can ignore the fact that you made the whole village to be demonic as if they have no limits, but no way can I ignore the fact that Naruto who had no sensei, no tutor or anyone to guide him be all the more powerful enough to do the things he did.

The reason Naruto became a good anime and captured the hearts and minds of many youths was the fact that he was positive even in the face of despair. He believes that it is better to stay naive instead of going against his moral code. He keeps his word. These are qualities for a typical protagonist but Naruto embodies that in his own way and attracts a lot of people. That is why the anime was enjoyable.

And here are Authors like you thinking, 'The original novel is bullshit and idiotic, so let me make this an angsty and dark story!' and congragu-fucking-lations you got the story you wanted. One problem is all you have written is crap.

Now I will tell you and your readers this, If you think that even for a moment that this story talks about realism and drama and it is mature, then I say that your teenage hormones are raging too much and you need to meditate to control yourself.

If you say that this is fanfiction and we can do whatever, then I say that you don't deserve to say that because those who have not understood the core idea of Naruto and his message to the world are not true fans but idiots who assume things on their own. You can write the story as it is your right but whatever you write is still crap.

If you say that you can relate to this and think that this is way better, thinking that I can't understand this cause I am a Boomer. Then you are absolutely right, I can't relate because I have not experienced such things nor will I hope that anyone will experience it but the way I see it, it seems you guys/girls have, so visit a therapist when you can. Apparently 10k of you or so need to do that.

Yea had to stop by 1/4 into chapter 2. No way in every shape, way, or form could the 3rd Hokage make a team of 1 genin with NO teacher. So good luck

This is all kinds of fucked up

Damn you for making such a good story and then leaving it alone for 8 years, you monster

continua. No me dejes con la intriga

This story is so dark, and at the same time infinitely more believable then the original. The warring states period was dark and bloodthirsty. Much like this... I don't normally like dark things like this but somehow this author knows just how much to push before pulling back to keep interest.

Also... I want to see sasuke funking dead. I've always hated that arrogant that waffle

p lol

I have a good story, I hope you come back to it someday.

Wow never thought I'd see a naruto more emo than sasuke. Not to mentiom bs lol he did not through worse than that stuff

Honestly in many ways I hate the logic in your version of Naruto but unlike the other readers,I think it makes your story 10/10. I get so mad with the story I gotta read more,I laugh at the comedy of your story I read more. And thank you for not going crazy with the sad moments(or at least putting in some type of criticism into the sad moments). Honestly Sakura claiming Ino unexpected. For know I feel the Kin attempted rape was unneeded although,her calling naruto "naruto-sama" during her fight had my lmao lowkey. I agree with everyone else tho about naruto getting scared on the chest even though now Neji will underestimate him. And lastly,damn it I wanted hinata to win );

Its not ninja-to its just ninjato you dont need the dash and its super annoying to read it like that

this has essentially been stations of cannon with naruto as the punching bag. also contains child rape. I'm out.

Can I point something out. Even if her taijustu is weak in order to be a jonin, most if not ALL of your skills and attributes have to be minimum jonin level. That's why special jonin EXIST. If Kurenai was just jonin level with genjustu shed be a special jonin, but shes not shes a jonin with a specialty in genjustu

Shorter my ass, again you did good on this one, it do not let confidence blind you, or whatever stoic people say. Again you did good