Reviews for Children of the Cloud
nalakahansato chapter 5 . 6/1
This is actually one of the best stories that I've read in awhile. It's an absolute shame that you might not update this book again. And, in all honesty, am a bastardized Swedish. Third Swedish, third Norwegian and third German.
wind-0-chaser chapter 1 . 5/8
ahhaah my first fic reading sexy hiashi times
LordHatredX chapter 5 . 10/7/2019
really to bad story has stopped

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Guest chapter 5 . 5/11/2019
Man that was intense the last chapter..i hope u continue with this story cuz i love naruhina
QueenDeadPool chapter 5 . 8/16/2017
Liked this a lot sad to see it hasn't updated in a long time.
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 4/17/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 3 . 1/25/2017
What are Naruto and hinata wearing?
nightwind83 chapter 5 . 8/13/2016
love the story real said that you seamed to abandoned it
HadrianSlytherinPeverell chapter 5 . 8/5/2016
I kind of felt bad for Sasuke at the end even though I don't like him and pity him
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 3/2/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 2 . 1/21/2016
Please don't make this a harem fic. Just, please don't.
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
nice
TGARASHI chapter 6 . 1/7/2015
Please continue story
TGARASHI chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
Damn you made the cloud village look like total dicks is the rikage the 3rd or 4th ?
STAG98 chapter 6 . 12/8/2014
I'm really liking this story so far; please update soon.
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