I like it! Hope you continue.

Please tell me your writing more

Can you write more? I really like this.

Make more plz! Its really good!

OoO Its reallly good pleases keep going :)

Dude that was an awesome sentance! I wish you could have thrown that one in there!

mmmmmmm coooooool

I started reading this months ago and wondered what had happened to it. So you have adopted this story then? I am excited to see it being updated. That said, I am happy with the way this chapter turned out. You seem to be doing the story idea and original author justice ;) Good job.

Hey! :)

Ouch, that must hurt Ichigo!

Aw, is Ichigo's family dead? :(

Woo! Shiro! Cool! Shiro visited Ichigo!

Thanks for making this!

~ Anitoon3

Hi!

Aw, poor Ichigo!

Oh my gosh! He might die! :(

Yay! Shiro showed up! :)

Thanks for making this!

~ Anitoon3

Hi there!

wow, this is good! :)

Woah, this is bloody.

Who shot Ichigo?

~ Anitoon3

Hmm...interesting, but if Teal is reading it it must be good! Haha I shall follow this story too.

Please update soon

yay! :D they meet and Ichi's coherent and they like one another! :D yay! uh oh... ominous indeed! O.o i anxiously await the next chapter, and you have my total understanding about pesky writer's block -_-; damn nearly always happens to me too T-T

WAH! When are you going to update again? Is that the hogyoku in Ichigo? I wanna know! Stop whatever it is you're doing and start typing chapter three!

Slightly confusing but I need more!