sad to see that you haven't updated anything for a long time, this is awesome.

the first oc/ibiki ive read ... pretty good

i really like this story so far! plz update soon!

Hahaha, you evil writer ! Giving gossip food to the needy nurses, tsk tsk, that's wrong, you know ?

Oh well, with a tremendous effort, I will now go to sleep and read the rest tomorrow morning,

This is off to a great start ! :)

Adorable ! You sure know how to take the drama out of the scenery !

Like I mentioned before, 'I'll read just one more', because my toes are getting numb, I need some sleep..

Oh, and I'm looking for a soundtrack to listen to while reading, so far I've found the album Invoke of Arto Lindsay, but it doesn't fit exactly. I'll keep it until I find something better though.

Funny how fast that hospital gossip travels.

HAHA, poor Ibiki, gettin' the 'big bro talk' while he had no clue she liked him (and, well, neither does she apparently).

Here are hugs and oreos for making me laugh with Shinya's actions !

You gotta love the Nara family, I love that you've integrated them into the story !

Little Shikamaru is just too cute, and his parents are very funny when interacting with each other

It's 1:3o am here, I'll read one more chapter and go to bed (while thinking "that's what they /all/ say")

So, nobody visited him in the hospital because they're all at war ?

Surely he should have some kind of relative left in the village...

Oh and I love written irony "...not to mention articulate", it makes me smile when the reader can figure the tone the writer intended, you should put more of those in :)

Oh, and are my comments a bother if I make them after every chapter ? Even when they're not substantial ones ?

Entertaining indeed, she manages a whole chapter without an appearance, and yet, she keeps us (and him) wondering on her behavior

"He liked Sachi better, he decided." that's cute :)

I'm devouring the chapters one by one, I didn't even check if he story was finished or if there were more to come. Maybe I should look at that to see if I have to savor it more... (in any case I think I'll move on to the other stories of the serialhugger community after I'm done with this fic! )

Ah, yes ! This reminds me that fanfiction can be good, and that is such a pleasant thought :)

I'm glad this chapter was a bit longer than the others, and now, the machine is rolling ...

Oh boy, reading this at night with a warm cup of tea is the best thing that has happened to me after my college exams :)

So far, so good, I shall keep on reading then !

lmao... i can't believe she said that to makoto XD hahaha great job and plz update soon

How could I not see that my request had been granted ? It's been so long since I've been to , and I am so glad that the first thing I find out was this. I cannot wait to read the other chapters !

I truly loved Just The Fact That She Does and I have a feeling this will be as good as the other.

I have to get back to my studies, but I'll read a couple chapters tonight.

Thank youuuuu~ !

lol this is an awesome story! i cant wait until the next update