This might not be the most fit to describe this fic, but this is a lovely story.
I love how you write Liam and his and Break's friendship and the relationship of the Rainsworth trio. And I especially love the March Hare here. His longing for Hatter is heartfelt and I smiled so wide when they finally met (the part where they danced like an uncaring duo they are is my favorite).
There are some grammar mistakes scattered here and there but they are not beyond fixing (and maybe I shouldn't be one to talk about that).

I know Pandora Hearts has long since been finished and you might have moved on to another fandom, but I'm looking forward for the sequel! :)

You sure took opportunity of that time when Oz whispers to Reim! I loved that.

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This was an amazing story I'm really happy I found it. I love your writing style and I can't wait until your next story comes out. Please keep writing your simply fantastic at it.

I love this. I'm just simply amazed about how interested I was in this particular story. You have the action, suspense, everything that makes a story, like this one, awesome. Keep up the good work and you keep being better.

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So. I didn't even know Liam/Break was a thing, and when I realized it was I wasn't too sure about it. Then I read this. And OH MY GOD. Every time you wrote anything in the Hatter or the Hare's point of view I squealed inside. I adore how you wrote them-and how your characters interacted with one another. And, YES FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS SHINY PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. Gah. Reading this and then the latest updates of Pandora Hearts-More importantly the theories that **Spoiler Retrace 94** Break might still be alive...And I thought of this fic and went 'HELL YESH!'

A great ending to a magnificent story! I loved it from beginning to end- and I'll be looking forward to the sequel!

And so the journey winds to a close. Poignant last lines, by the way. I loved the way the Hatter and Hare finally closed the gap forced between them, and how those earrings burned purple for hours. :)

A sequel sounds lovely. Your rendition of both the Hatter and Hare is very intriguing. It would be an exciting prospect to explore how their relationship, and that of their contractors, will evolve given the necessity and opportunity to work together in the field (should Liam choose to remain in Pandora, that is). In any case, I'm glad the journey is not yet over. Our beloved heroes have yet another great adventure waiting for them just off the horizon...and what an adventure it shall be!

That was awesome! :D I liked your version of the March Hare, he is awesome

Cool! I understand your need for a break from this fic, but I look forward to the sequel just the same. Though the ending is clearly a cliff hanger, it does have a feel of an end. I liked it. Liam's leaving Barma and probably goes to Rainsworth. Hopefully Break and Liam can think up a way to keep Liam from a premature death.
Great job, I really enjoyed this fic!

Eeee! I can't wait for Hare's appearance! I'm sure Hatter will be releaved to see his partner,and Hare is going to be furious when he sees Hatter's appearance. Oh, Demios and Vincent are in for it now!
I wonder what your going to make March Hare's powers be. I'm looking forward to it.
Poor Break. Concerned about using Hatter so he accidentally give Vincent to much wiggle room and is getting beaten, quite severely. I'm almost positive it's going to take a few days rest before he'll be able to walk around again. And dear Sharon! She tried, but her Chain is no match for Demios either.

Uh oh. and things heat up. I hope Liam will be okay, maybe he'll actually use his Chain and break the conditioning he's been going through his whole life. And of course this would occur in the battle with Lily, unless you have something else in mind. *squeal* I look forward to it!

And the March Hare and Mad Hatter are starting to get impatient. They know they are close to each other, but no one can put the pieces together. One day, someone, be it Break or Sharon or even Liam, is going to take off those earrings. Though I don't think he does before he used March Hare. Oh I can't wait for that part! I wonder at what Mad Hatter said about not being able to use all of his power and this causing Break to wither. And I wonder about March Hare's contractors not lasting long. Could this be because of Hatter's power? Or is it because march Hare has a deteriorating effect on his contractor if he isn't with Hatter like Hatter has on Break? My mind is spinning with possibilities!

Liam's sight sure is interesting! Keehee, he knows somethings up with Elliot and Leo, even if they don't. Hopefully Liam will be able to get to Break. I don't really remember what happens to break in Sablier, but I think he fought some Baskervilles? Forgive me I haven't read that part in a while.
Well, whatever happens I look forward to it!

Oh oh! The seal did its job (sort of) and seperated Break and Liam. Hopefully Hatter will start putting the pieces together and realize that March Hare is being suppressed. He's not going to be happy about that!
I wonder if Sharon will be able to get Liam's chain's name out of the frazzled Liam. Hopefully she will. But if not, I just hope she can calm him down.