Ok I love this. It’s cute.

Oh wow. You know... I...mmm... I’d love to rewrite this series for you.

Cute. Cliche and full of grammar mistakes but cute.

Wait a minute... Oogie don't have no fingers in which to snap 0.0... -_- Illuminati confirmed.

P. S Great chapter tho I must say

- this was great

I loved it please add more chapters to it :D

Oh my gosh! I am at a loss for words. You my dear have quite a talent, and this story is a wonderful example of it.

I cannot remember when I last read anything (including novels from well known authors) that have left me with such feelings. Its not often that an author can pull strings on the readers emotions but you did a wonderful job.

When the moments were tender with Jack and Eve I found myself holding my breath in anticipation for what would happened, and when the truth was revealed to them and how their love was essentially stolen away from them (twice now!) I felt such sorrow and sadness at the injustice of it all.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, and I look forward to the following book!

I have read 15 chapters and I am absolutely captivated.
the story between Jack and Eve is sweet. I cannot recall reading so many chapters of a fanfiction all at once.

I am very curious to see what will happen when Jack finds out she is human.

so what the last chapter it so sad

That was an amazing story! Simply FANTASTIC! I loved the plotline, and your OC is very well thought out by the way! I'm pretty glad I found this one!

And really, it just cracks me up how many people agree on the fact that Oogie was responsible for Jack's death. Oh the IDEAS I can find in this place! XD Lol.

Well, anywho I'll be lookin' forward to that sequal! C-YA!

Ange de Randomosity

woah.. this chapter was amaizing .. cant wait to see if jack will rescue Eve

yay new chp please update again!

All caught up! Amazing but don't worry I promise to be nice. I liked the story and the flow. Check your spelling though you have a couple words that are oddly spelled. like frustrated, you spelled it so oddly I can't even spell it like you did. It was the chapter about finding the doorway to Christmas town.

Happy writing and looking forward to the grand finale!

:D

.. A new chapter finally.. thnx

the story is just amaizing.. and hunting ( in a good way )..

cant wait to see what will happen next .