Love your writing because this story is as depressing as hell.

More! Please, I love it!

Ya know, this could easily be turned into a " decoy body left by Link who secretly found a way back to the Twilight Realm" scenario.

Omg this is extremely dark and morbid but really well done. I really hope it gets continued eventually.

Wow plz update soon

Damn, dark but very true. It's only natural for the living to grief for the dead, poor town and Zelda. I wonder what Minda is thinking about all this, if she ever learns about it. Keep writing bro, you know if you need any ideas or hlep I got your back, peace.

update soon please...please.

That was a beautiful read, thank you, just what I needed right now. Keep up the great work.

Although this is a very sad chapter, I loved it. I dont know if "sad" is the word, but whatever the word is, you have the ability to capture the reader's interest within one chapter. If a character in the story thinks something is sad, so does the reader. Usually it takes several chapters to develop characters, and get the reader this "into the story", if you will. You accomplished this in one chapter. And the fact that you finally updated kinda adds to how amazed I am right now. lol

Anyway, Great job, cant say I loved this chapter, because I would never want Link to die like this, but ignoring the depressing side of the story, I did love it and I cant wait for the next one.

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Great story. It is sad and I find a good sad story help the soul. (to say that is corny but hey its true). I and sorry to hear what is goinf on with your parents and not but thank you for this lovly story and I hope you continue it.

~best with wish~

~~and a belessing~~

~~~Fay of the Ink and the paper~~~

Good fic perhaps

OMG So sad. It was really good I hope u do continue it i love it. I love a good sad story it clears the soul. I always feel better after reading one. so please continues.

Good job on that! I wonder what will happen to the kids...

Nice story, once again. It'd be nice to see updates, but I think it works well enough by itself too. Either way, thanks for the good read.

This is fascinating. You have the makings of a great tragedy here. I cant wait to see how it turns out.