its not that bad at all! btw his last name is Kabra, u no that rite?

I like!

There was too much song and not enough fic, if you ask me. But judging from your other songfics, you have obviously gotten that in your reviews and improved! I love your sappy songfics and stories because Im such a sappy person!

I dont have any critisim at all, it was awesome- and i really hate ian/amy so... thats a bonus for me!

i love the 39 clues series! great song fic

I thought you did a fairly good job. My only problem is that I am obsessed with Ian and Amy.

Now I am going to run around my room screaming "IAN AND AMY FOREVER!" and soon enough one of the idiot boys in my neighborhood will throw a snowball at my window, I'll open it and they'll be all, "What the heck are you doing?" Then they'll throw a snowball at me and I'll tell them that they are turds and life would be better off without them.

I am not psychic, I just know these things.

u say it sucks but in my opinion it was ok, i've read worse stories. for example: one time i read a story (it wasn't part of the 39 clues btw) and the main character got pregnant and then died while giving birth to the baby! i was so mad afterward! hows that for a sucky story!

Don't EVER say it's going to be bad. You need to build confidence!

Great job :) I didn't think it was all that bad. Have you ever heard the CSI remix of this song? I have it on my iPod, along with the original. Look it up, it's really good.

The only thing I think is a little not right in this, is where amy says "I am such an idiot!" You really only need to do one exclamation point. If you do too many, it makes it seem cheesy. Sorry :(

Well, there is a piece of constructive criticism!

Great job, again!

~4Eva