...*sniff* :'(

you are right, NCS is the greatest LPer ever, and i loved his LP, and I also love this story, it's awsome, for some reason, by review sounds like it was written by a bot

Wonderful piece, very emotionally moving story.

i liked it but whats an lp?

This story is very well done and wonderfully explores the dark elements of TWW that most Zelda fans overlook due to the cel-shaded art style. You have also done a fantastic job of showing how callous and cruel the pirates, specifically Tetra, actually were. This story only needs minor adjustments:

-By the time of TWW, Hyrule and the Sages were forgotten. The only tale remembered on the Great Sea was the story of the Hero of Time, which was told in TWW's opening. Even the name Hyrule is forgotten, and the Triforce is only known to a few people who mistakenly call it the Triumph Forks and denounce the word Triforce as crazy. The fate of Hyrule wasn't remembered either, as stated in TWW's introduction sequence.

-You should use italicized text instead of bold text. Italicized text stands out while not being jarring in comparison to the rest of the words in a story.

Ultimately, this was a wonderful piece of fan fiction, and I hope that you will write even better stories in the future.