Reviews for Mismatched and Messed Up
Ami1010 chapter 14 . 10/2/2013
Finished! :)
I had a lot of fun reading this.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/1/2013
Really good story
Ami1010 chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
Oh, Neji is, of course likeable. I can never bring myself to hate him now, because I did hate him when I first started watching Naruto.
So, I really like this chapter a lot. The NejiTen scene was nice, sweet and funny. XD
And I like the Neji-Hiashi relationship. Hiashi is just like that; he does something that makes you hate him then goes and does something that makes you take back your negative feelings. He is only so strict!
Ami1010 chapter 12 . 10/1/2013
Oh my God! And to think that it was Hinata's idea! O.o
And I like the way Sasuke phrased it. XD
Ami1010 chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
I was so happy that Tenten and Sasuke finally broke up, and then this happens :( But, hey, there are still four chapters and something has to happen, though I can't help but think that it was a little overdone how badly Tenten wants to have a time for herself, I mean, yeah sure, she should think about it but her letter made it seem like a goodbye, and then Neji reacted in that direction too :(

And by the way, since I used my review for the 9th chapter, I want to add that I loved Sasuke, he was so good, and dare I say, sweet!
Ami1010 chapter 8 . 10/1/2013
Oops! The last review was meant for the 8th chapter! ;P
Ami1010 chapter 9 . 10/1/2013
My, all of them are making bad mistakes, but hey, I am enjoying it :P I wonder how far Neji and Tenten would go this time! They would for sure be the bad ones if it got too far.
Ami1010 chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
I am afraid I am running out of your NejiTen fics :( I can't stop reading!

I love the story so far, and I love that Neji and Tenten's relationship is still a friendship one, never mind their current argument, because I am so very much enjoying Neji and Lee together trying to protect their friend. And I think that SasuTen is my second favorite Tenten pairing.
Tenten is acting a little too cruelly toward her friends, but I think it is quie the right way to write her that way, because in her situation it is the only way to act even if it is wrong, at least for a while.
And I am curious as to what had happened between Sasuke and Sakura.
Broken Jar Of Hearts chapter 12 . 1/17/2013
You're really used to writing dark stories... Writing style is still good as always, I wish you'll write something light, though... But I understand that you find it hard to write about Neji right now... .
Broken Jar Of Hearts chapter 10 . 1/16/2013
My thoughts while reading this chapter are about Neji applying for another school? :-?
Broken Jar Of Hearts chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
This reminds me of Gossip Girl...
94stephanie chapter 14 . 6/24/2012
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I can't believe it's over. I freakin loved this story! It was so good! Very well written and kept me reading and interested the whole time! Loved it!
94stephanie chapter 9 . 6/24/2012
I secretly really liked Tenten and Sasuke together but Neji and Tenten together trumps all! Tenten's and Sasuke's break up was perfect. I don't know how to describe it but it was just as I imagined. LOVE THIS STORY! :D
Firefairy001 chapter 14 . 12/30/2011
Best NejiTen I've ever read next to "Right kind of Wrong"
renzie17 chapter 14 . 11/16/2011
OMG. I LOVED IT! AT FIRST I thought this story was gonna be one of those cliche school girl stories that's full of dialogue and lacks words but then I decided to give it a shot and I thought it was beautifully outlined. :) Although, your epilogue lacks something (because I want mooooaaar xD)... Nevertheless, good job!

rnz17
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