Hey! not bad at all... yuuri is a bit ooc but this is fresh, more like the maoh...banzai! :)

The best kyo kara maoh story I have read so far.

awwwww cu6te

that was too cute and im glad yuu-chan did this :)a devoted fan

You deserve to have a credit for having a great story on your first try to make a yaoi fic (.,,,but honestly..is this really your first time to make one?...)

THis is good. I've been watching KKM for quite a while, but I don't really like paid attention to Yuri and Wolfram's story since it was not really emphasized on the anime...but this gave me a thought that perhaps I have to be more critical in minding single details on their presumed relationship..Thanks.

If there were people,by the way who degraded your creativity before, I believe it's best if you silence them with your works. I believe you have 'it'.

Good work.

Wow! Really good for your first lemon! I give you thumbs up. -

Sexy and nosebleed inducing, to put it briefly.

But just one thing I didn't like was the way you described Wolfram. Walks like a soldier but looks like a girl?

I'm sorry, but Wolfram does NOT look like a girl at ALL. NOBODY in the novels thinks so. Especially, if he's an ADULT, as he is in your story. Do you think Shinou looks like a girl?

If you want to know why I say this, visit my profile and go to "Wolfram's Physical Appearance".

And hey, men in the castle do NOT wear SLEEPING SHORTS AND SHIRTS to bed. That is RIDICULOUS. This is a MEDIEVAL age, NOT the modern age. Men wear nightgowns or robes, and not just Wolfram. And no, nightgowns are NOT feminine.

Consider the constructive criticism and please don't repeat it in another fanfic.

Nice!

Really, this is your first try on a yaoi story? That's so cool because this story is so good ! I love to see yuuri making Wolfram submit to his dominence. It makes him a strong character than the "wimp" he is in the anime you know? hehe

The ending is really nice, I love it ! Especially when Yuuri whispers "I love you" to wolfram. so kawai !

Love the story ! You should write more Yuuram fics ! Good luck with your future work _

OMG I was thinking yuri became a cruel person lol you got me..lol..I was startled at the end when yuri turned kind again lol that was GREAT !

you've never written a yaoi before? wow. I've been writing yaoi for years now, yet I can't still write like this. I mean lemon that is. and you're good.

Wow, for your first yaoi that was darn awesome! I have read lots and never came to see one like this. Keep writing! _

i loved it, its very good i love wolfram he so cute

nice

Lovely~ indeed, Yuuri does sit on the throne! That was a juicy lemon hee hee ;D great writing!