Reviews for The Invitational
RustedEagleWings chapter 6 . 10/20/2013
Cute story. I love how they remember Sai and how Akira's daughter wins the title.
Hikari-Pandora chapter 6 . 7/9/2011
Brilliant idea, thanks!
ice cold wolf chapter 6 . 9/1/2010
I loved the story! lol Waya and his sushi. I was wondering, wasn't Waya's name Yoshitaka?
sweetyamiyugigirl chapter 6 . 5/17/2010
I like this quite a bit, I liked how he got 'revenge' and how the story unfolded, it's quite sweet!
orchid chapter 6 . 2/28/2010
That was sweet and short. Good Job
Coryx chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
"Sai lite" xD Rofl.

Hm, don't really like how you're using "Shindou"-"Hikaru" sounds better, I think, especially if it's his POV. Plus, it's what everyone calls him in both anime and manga, excluding Akira and some of the pros. Or, I should say, what everyone his own age calls him.

Plenty of people already think Hikaru's a fruitcake. xD

Aha, tricked into buying sushi. I had sushi once. Didn't much like it. The fish was too chewy, although it was fresh. The seaweed bit was good.

MONKEY LOL. Kuwabara looks like a monkey, even Hotta herself admitted it. (Agh, keep wanting to say Hoshino. Hoshino is DGM...)
Sara chapter 6 . 2/8/2010
Whaa? This is the end? I was hoping for some Akira/Hikaru interactions. You know.. "To..Touya? You don’t think we are friends? *Sniff*" I love fanfictions about Akira/Hikaru friendship. I hope "Outplayed" is gonna be updated soon :)
sunbeam chapter 5 . 2/4/2010
Nice story and well written. Akira felt a little out of character. His dialogue was a little too haughty, more like what Ochi might say.

I also like how Waya's tournament took on a life of its own. Keep up the good work.
melian chapter 5 . 2/3/2010
I really like it. Please write more soon :).
Sprytes chapter 5 . 2/3/2010
Thanks for the info about The Heian Fairytale. Can only hope for a flash of inspiration. :) This story is good and it keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work and update soon, please!
Reis chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
Well, I enjoyed this.
MoonClaimed chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
Oh...the plot thickens. I like it! ;)