Reviews for The Invitational |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story. I love how they remember Sai and how Akira's daughter wins the title. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant idea, thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story! lol Waya and his sushi. I was wondering, wasn't Waya's name Yoshitaka? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this quite a bit, I liked how he got 'revenge' and how the story unfolded, it's quite sweet! |
![]() ![]() That was sweet and short. Good Job |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Sai lite" xD Rofl. Hm, don't really like how you're using "Shindou"-"Hikaru" sounds better, I think, especially if it's his POV. Plus, it's what everyone calls him in both anime and manga, excluding Akira and some of the pros. Or, I should say, what everyone his own age calls him. Plenty of people already think Hikaru's a fruitcake. xD Aha, tricked into buying sushi. I had sushi once. Didn't much like it. The fish was too chewy, although it was fresh. The seaweed bit was good. MONKEY LOL. Kuwabara looks like a monkey, even Hotta herself admitted it. (Agh, keep wanting to say Hoshino. Hoshino is DGM...) |
![]() ![]() Whaa? This is the end? I was hoping for some Akira/Hikaru interactions. You know.. "To..Touya? You don’t think we are friends? *Sniff*" I love fanfictions about Akira/Hikaru friendship. I hope "Outplayed" is gonna be updated soon :) |
![]() ![]() Nice story and well written. Akira felt a little out of character. His dialogue was a little too haughty, more like what Ochi might say. I also like how Waya's tournament took on a life of its own. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() I really like it. Please write more soon :). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the info about The Heian Fairytale. Can only hope for a flash of inspiration. :) This story is good and it keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work and update soon, please! |
![]() ![]() Well, I enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...the plot thickens. I like it! ;) |