That worked well.

Great Prime's creed.

That was perfect.

That sounds like it fits the Aerialbots.

That was wonderful.

That sounds just like Ratchet.

That sounds just like Bumblebee.

That sounds like Ironhide's personal creed.

That was great.

While I might have hoped for creeds not based on existing ones, I still like your renditions of them, and how you extended them toward different characters. The last chapter was my favorite. Indeed, those who recite the creeds are expected to live by them, and you capture that perfectly.

LOVE this! Really sweet. Well done :D

RXP

these are all outstanding. lovely, very lovely indeed.

You know, every time I see this, all I can think of is the scene from Full Metal Jacket and R. Lee Ermey yelling, "What is your major malfunction, numbnuts!" It was cute, and certainly fitting.

Gix

This was a powerful chapter. There were a few spelling mistakes, they have a spell checker in the document files when you open them on . It would help. It wasn't bad, so there's no worry, but I did notice them.

Otherwise, I love how you showed the almost inhuman strength Will showed in order to protect those he loved, and his dedication to his team, and his world.

Wonderful work!

This was definitely a sweet chapter. It could have used a little more punctuation, you had a few run on sentences, but they didn't take away from the story at all, so it's all good.

Cute thought with Will taking care of his teething daughter, and her love of the military song.

Excellent work!