Awww. poor Harry. This separation will be good to get him used to doing without his family once he's foisted off to Hogwarts where no one sees their parents for months on end.

*psst: 8 and 9 year old boys are not all that mesmerized by Broadway plays... ... ...*

Why do stories like this always have Sirius going way too far overboard with his punishments for Harry? Is excessive punishment somehow supposed to be sexy?

Absolutely loved the plot. The spelling and grammar mistakes bothered me, but not enough to stop reading. I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Yay! Finally done! I love how well-rounded your Potter-Black family is! I absolutely love that Sirius' duchess is a squib! This story truly makes you feel that whether you are magical, mundane, or squib, it shouldn't really matter. Everyone is great in their own way and contribute a lot to the world if they so choose.

I would love to see his mundane school friends continue in the story and become helpful and amazing themselves.

Only critical part I can comment on is that the story felt a bit rushed as you raced through Harry's childhood. Just let Harry stop and smell the roses a bit and focus more on showing Harry's relationships with others. You have built an absolutely amazing support system for Harry, and I want to feel more...the feels of that. That will be Harry's truest strength in the end.

just want to point out hindustani isn’t a language. i think you meant to type hindi

I enjoyed this. Thanks for all the hard work and sharing.

OMG! What an amazing story. I hope you realise you are responsible for the bags under my eyes. I would start a chapter thinking I'll just reading then go to bed but couldn't stop reading. You are an awesome writer. My favourite story is Trust is a relative thing but I wonder why you never finished it instead leaving us on a cliff hanger? Please finish it so am desperate to know how it ens. Silverfawkes you are one he'll it a writer
you are amazing. Keep writing. Xxxxxxxxx

BRO JOSHI IS MY SURNAME AND WHEN HE SAID JOSHI I NEARLY SHAT MYSELF LMAO

Oh my gosh that’s so fucking in character for Hagrid like you got it spot on, 10/10 for your portrayal of him already I can’t wait to read more ok byr

Is this a stargate crossover?

I’m going to be honest with you no one is intelligent enough to learn four languages and speak them fluently by the age of seven. Then proceed to learn two more at the same time. Also harry wouldn’t have the time to play sports, learn two different martial arts, and keep up with their studies just not enough time. I get it that your a mature writer at this point in time but at least try to be realistic with main characters.

Harry was 15 months old so a little over a year old when they died. He’s far to young to have a single concept of what happened. The only thing he’d be crying about is the pain from his scar.

Fue exelente tu historia espero continúes algún día con la segunda parte gracias

An incredible story from start to finish . I loved Sirius'
Savior. Great characters, both the canon ones and your original ones. Throughout this story you made me laugh, cry and worry about these characters. Thank you. I look forward to reading Harry's Hero. Well done!