This is a beautiful description of two fine and enduring characters, and of the happy unfolding of their semi-forbidden love.

The author is a fine writer of dialogue and exposition, and has a firm and total grasp of these two kind, intelligent, and archetypal (hot) characters.

More spork, please!

D. Bond
Pittsburgh, PA

Wow writing, very good!

Lovely
Your story just gives me a good fealing no drama just raw fealing and hugs and a building realashionship between an 'introvert' and an extrovert
Maybe I like this so much because I was never the tochi type, but then hat a friend who kinda really really was and so I became kina hughappy to, with the person. At the beginning it stressed me but now it just calms me an realives my stress, even if I didn't realize I was stressed (: so I kind of can ralate thank you for your story gives a good fealing ;)

I cried. And I took a selfie crying bc I felt so stupid. Thank you.

Hey! Slightly late to this party (Nearly a decade late), but whatever.

I love this chapter in particular so far. I'm as braindead as heck, so I won't write an essay here. IN summary, I love this chapter and honestly the entire thing, it is well-written and as a bunch of development in each chapter... I'm beginning to write an essay, and I ain't letting that happen.

I love this, and if I weren't so late to this party, I would say keep writing!

This was wonderfully written. I literally read the whole thing in one sitting. It was excellent.

A beginning. I like that.

Doux jésus ... that was epic ! Thank you so very much :D

OKAY SO THIS WAS UPDATED LIKE A MILLION YEARS AGO BUT I JUST HAD TO SAY THAT I LOVED IT AND IT WAS WORTH STAYING UP UNTIL TWO AM TO READ. Like actually I don’t read a ton of slow burn but because of how long it takes but DANG THAT PAYOUT AT THE END. Absolutely loved it. Spock being an emotional idiot is the best thing to grace this fandom, and I just wanted to let you know how amazing I thought this fic was :)

This was just awesome. I can't even begin to thank you for writing this. You are a great writer and I hope you realize that. I haven't been able to write not one review throughout your whole story because I was sooooo invested in it. All of the angst was almost too much for my weak heart, but alas I have pulled through... anyways, I hope you will continue writing great stories such as this. Even if I were to never read one again, (not on purpose) or if I come across a story of yours without knowing that it's you, it won't matter. every single author and their stories leave an imprint on my mind , whether I remember it or is no exception. This may seem like a bit much, but I like to write these kinds of notes so that I may be able to provide even the tiniest bit of happiness to people. I don't know when you last updated this, or when you wrote it, or even if you still get on this very website, but I do hope that you will see this message and have a great day!

For some reason I absolutely love Spock's refusal to admit he's attracted to Jim lol

'arms'- christina perri

Friend. Brother. Lover.
T'hy'la.

Esta historia fue hermosa! de principio a fin, tenia de todo!
Muchas por tan excelente obra!

me encanta la energia que tienes!

Regards!
Laura

I loved this chapter! and the sweeeeet kiss
They are so so so beautiful and sweet! and all the amazing things in this world

Thank you!
Laura