I don't usually leave reviews and I'll tell you why, because if I'm reading it then it has to be good or i don't finish it. I loved this.

This is a great story! I thought the plot was original and interesting! The chapter length, and general story length was also good, as it made for a nice, and quick read. I also loved the ending! I have read this story before, and I found this was a memorable ending, but I could never find it until now, so I am extremely happy that I found it again!
Great story, loved every bit of it!

OMG I laughed to hard at the ending I had tears streaming down my face. You are definitely a talented writer and I hope to read more of your works! I love this pairing to btw )

Omg! This is priceless! Adore it!

Excellent story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over.

hahaha! HAHAHA! come on peter, they're married! lovely fic, by the way. and i agree, it should have ended like this.

"Have you never heard of restraint Caspian!" freaking hilarious.

:3 :3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3 Welll... I haven't fangirl-ed that hard in the longest of times.
Usually my replies are contstructive and complimentary...but I'm still freaking out about the fantastic-ness of this wonderfull bit of writing. Please don't stop writing, alright? You've got a gift and a talent. I wish that you would have gotten more reviews before I found this treasure. But that is the excitement of Fanfiction hunting, is it not? Finding the diamonds and treasures hidden in the database-searching for the wonders of underrated fanfiction!

In spirit and likeness of my normal reviews, I would like to comment on your sentence structure, plot, and the general flow of your story. First off, you did incredibly well and you are gifted. Your sentences were not awkward or chopp or grammaticaly incorrect. A for you, my friend. Secondly, your plot was original and well constructed. You used the foreshadowing to your advantage without making it overly obvious what direction you planned to send your story in. And last, I could like to comment on the flow of your story. It was a good length and the passing of time and events were well timed and easy to follow.

May Aslan keep you. ;-)
Yours truly, -Invisible Puppeteer

I love it

good story really liked it.

That was completely different! I'm sure Caspian was so out of his element in England! It was hilarious! As was the ending! Great job! :)

To: . .S I don't know that you'll ever read this. I don't have any other way of contacting you however. Actually I'm pretty sure you won't but in case you do I wanted to say...You do have a father who'll protect you like that. He loves you more than anything else. More than a dozen awesome brothers could. He made you. 'Before I formed you in the womb I knew you. Before you were born I set you apart.' He loves you, Hon. Don't ever doubt it. Grace and Peace to you through our Lord Jesus Christ, Amen. NarniaNerd.

So, I want you to make me another one! A sequel or something. Maybe something about Caspian and Lucy's children. Oh, and all the cousins. Ooh, ooh, ooh! Maybe the kids could try to get Edmund a wife. Ha! That would be awesome! Anyway, I just loved this story although, apparently no one else has any sense. No suprise there. Common sense is dreadfully uncommon. I love how you just barely hint at mature things without getting to be completly too detailed. Some people rate it T and go as far as they possibly can. Personally I would rather not know about some things until I expeirience them myself, thank you. Anyway. That was off subject. -blush- So, I would try and write it myself because I really love writing but no email, no fanfics. Writing them anyway. Oh, but if you do write more PLEASE put my name in an authors note! Just because I've always wanted to see my name in an authors note! Also, is it strange I have a name and no account? I am the random chick who goes around posting as NarniaNerd. Grace and Peace to you through our Lord Jesus Christ, amen. NarniaNerd.

love the story

I like this story but LOVE the ending :)